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charmingal
Ok, I'm sure everyone has seen the Friends episode where Ross and Racheal get married while they're drunk! Well here's a challenge thats quite similiar to it!


Requirements:

-Dr and G are single in the beginning.

-Draco has a disaster of a date and Harry has married Hermoine so Ginny is depressed! .

-They get drunk. And when I say drunk, I mean, drunk. So drunk they can hardly see straight.

-While being drunk, Dr see's Ginny across the room,doesn't recongnise her but thinks she's incredibly sute! Ginny, impressed by the way Dr looks , lets him u know talk to her and then whistling.gif ...........


- Soon after they think of the bright idea of getting married. Going to a drivethrough wizarding wedding chapel (Do they have those in England? If not, they can use a Portkey and go to Vegas...) they get married.

-Wizarding wedding are much different. When a couple gets married, they are bound together for life. The only way for them to 'seperate' or 'divorce' is if both of the people want, truly, out of the marriage.


-Their wedding rings are the symbol--if the ring won't come off, the couple can't divorce.

-Media has a field day with this...

-Draco and Ginny are trying all they can to get a divorce, but, alas, it seems their rings just won't come off...

-Can be either chaptered or one shot.But it would be better if it was chaptered!Looking forward to your posts??
peanutbutterperfect
I'll give this a shot-




Ginny Weasley was sitting in the Leaky Cauldren, drowning herself in Firewiskey. Today had been the day from hell....well at least for her it had been. Today had been Harry and Hermione's wedding. The ceremony had been absolutly beautiful, and Hermione had looked stunning. But for Ginny, today all of her life suddenly hit rock bottom. She couldn't quite place why she was feeling this way, she was over the boy-who-lived. Wasn't she?

Ginny shook these thoughts out of her head and requested another bottle of liquor from the creepy looking bartender, who was only to happy to comply. He did n't care in the least bit that a young woman was getting piss-drunk. Hell, he thrived on people like this, who came in just to wash away their problems with a little (well, a lot) of alcohol.



On the other side of the room, a certain blonde haired Slytherin was also drowning his problems in in alcohol. It had been a horrible evening. Oh it had started out okay. Blaise had set him up on a date with a gorgeous women. Unfortunetly for Draco it turned out she was married. Her husband had stormed in in the middle of their date, causing a big scene. To top it all off, they had been at the fanciest reastaurant in all of wizarding Britain! Draco drunkenly promised himself he was going to kill Blaise the next time he saw him.


Draco suddenly decided that he needed more Firewiskey and looked up to call over a waiter, but something else, someone else rather caught his eye. She was the most exquisite looking creature he had ever seen. She was wearing baby blue dress robes, and her hair....oh her hair. It was the most beautiful shade of red Draco had ever seen, and was falling in ringletts down her back. Somewhere in the back of his mind Draco registered that he knew that hair from somewhere, but his jumbled brain wasn't able to hold on to the thought for very long. Her skin was creamy and looked absolutly delectable. Draco's mouth was practically watering as he thought about tasting her skin, and kissing her lips, which he noticed were full and red.


Before he even knew what he was doing he was out of his seat, and going over to talk to the beautiful women.




What do ya think? Should I continue? Make it into a full lengthed fic? Feedback would be most helpful! (ANd I apologize about any horrific spelling or grammer-without spell/grammar check I don't always catch stuff.)
Szaranea
Looks like a good start for a fic thumbup.gif

But there really are a lot of mistakes. Just a hint: don't always rely on the spell checker. Get a beta. Betas are a lot more reliable than the spell checker. Or at least they should be. Looking for a beta? Try here smile.gif

And I noticed that this is your first post! Don't you want to introduce yourself in the Wrestling the Troll Forum?

Ri
charmingal
thumbup.gif aMAZING- GO AHEAD PLS PLS WRITE THE ENITRE FIC!!!
peanutbutterperfect
I'm glad you like the begining! But I'm not gonna post more here, I'm gonna work on it and make it into a short fic, put some time into editing it, and post on my fanfiction.net account. Hopefully my other WIP will be accepted, and I will be able to post it here as well!
Szaranea
peanutbutterperfect: Well, do you have a beta? I strongly enourage getting one, if you want to be a PK author and you know that you tend to make mistakes smile.gif

Ri
peanutbutterperfect
I just asked someone in the Beta forum to beta for me, and I'm awaiting a reply.
peanutbutterperfect
I've added to and published the first part on my fanfiction account go check it out: Druken Stupor
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