^ Yes, it is. Thank you, by the way.

I liked all the poems written above with the small stories and such. Hmm... I think I'll try to write one... if I have enough time.

Sorry, I couldn't resist that little verse!

That was good crazybeutifulangel here's another one of mine:

Seeing the heart within his soul,
that was her talent, and even her goal,
Their beloved friendship began at youth,
and with that they found a truth,
A truth that said even when they were apart,
that they were with each other in their heart,
no matter the place, the date, or the year,
He vowed to come before the fall of the first tear,
leaving them both at a surrender,
leaving their minds in peace, and their soul tender...
not worrying about the lives they left behind,
love so heartwarming; so hard to find.

MOD NOTE: merging this into a related thread. Poetry contest, anyone?
~gal-texter / Pen May 2008




ok I thought I write a poem about Harry and Hermione well tell me what you think



I remember a time when the saying opposites attract was not quiet so true.

Where our parents would say find someone nice, someone like you.

Then this frenzy came around and people believed that to be happy you needed to follow the newer ways.

The few who didn’t believe would embark on a different ship then most of them there.

We all opened up the book, the first and felt magic pulsing in our veins.

It was there that we say the trio being formed.

For me and many more it was there I began my journey on that ship.

Most agreed but a majority fell away by the time that the third had come out to play.

Doubting Thomas’s they were in our eyes. JKR would see us through or so we would say.

So we held on with a faith and a hope that some thought quite mad.

But we bared through the Yule Ball and all of it’s pain.

We say the greened eyed monster and knew right then and there that things had changed.

Still we believed that Harry could be the only one for her.

The fifth came along and more proof there was in front of us.

Maybe it was Grawp or the bond that they shared but we believed that triumph was near.

But alas along came the sixth and crushed our hopes and dreams.

We’re riding a sunken ship they say but we’re still alive so must only be the doubter who jumped away.

My friends laugh and they say “Your ship is sunk. Move along to another one.” but I see in their eyes that for a time they too believed in the older ways.I will always believe in this ship





This is how I feel about our ship

So what do you think??????????????????

That was amazing!! very powerful!!!

That was brilliant, i really liked it!
Thats the first poem about Harry and Hermione that i've read,
very well done

Thats really good you should visit the Poems for the HHr soul on HBP discussion( by me:))

Well, I think I had tears in my eyes when I read it...so brilliant!!

Here's my go at a poem...

Harry's POV:
There are scars in our past that we might never forget,
And I hate to see you cry and yet,
I see he broke your heart again,
and I dont know why you suffer,
I want to be your loving hand,
that makes your insides flutter,
I want to be the hand that wipes away your tears,
Stops you from crying, and protects you from your fears,
I want to be the the hero who saved you from drowning in his lies,
because I cant take that painful look in your eyes,
I guess you just dont know how it pains me to see,
that you've been hurt yet again,
because he cant leave you be,
and now I wish, I only wish to be the voice in your head,
for you are mine, I wish I could tell you what I've already said,
I wish I we're obligated to see your beautiful smile,
the one that makes my cry myself but makes it all worth while,
I miss you, and your laughter, and your smile that could brighten a room,
the one little girl who made my insides bloom,
I want to be your shineing star,your wish come true,
because I am simply miserable when Im not with you.

How'd ya like it, good huh? lol probably not--I dunno.

Hermione POV:

Oh sweet angel why can't I be by your side,
your sunshine that makes everything right,
I want so much to be like all those other girls,
The kind that make your entire world,
I hate it so much when they hug you,
for then they held my life,
for if I were with out you I would simply die,
i'd miss your eyes; they're emerald green,
and when the moon hits them just right-- blue...
Oh I just can't be with out you,
Every night I close my eyes then I count to ten,
I never want to say those words, "What coudl have been..."
I would die for you, I would cry for you, I could never let you down,
I couldn't take it if you frown...

Where did everyone go? Hello...oh well

I once believed our ship would happen with out a struggle!
how silly of us all,
It takes a few years and the proper call,
The calling of true love, it takes long to form,
we all thought it would be a snap!
none of us would reform...
yea well we were abandoned by those so unworthy,
and yet we were presented by those who cared,
some HERONS! who finally shared,what we believed!
so carry on we will be stong~
Its only been prolonged...

wow both poems are really great....Harryhermionefan I just want to say I love the idea or theme about the "old ways" very insightful.

And Harryandhermionesdaughter I love your poem it was so flowing and touched on their relationship in the best way.!


Kudos to both of you!!

I remember a time when the saying opposites attract was not quiet so true.

Where our parents would say find someone nice, someone like you.

Then this frenzy came around and people believed that to be happy you needed to follow the newer ways.

The few who didn’t believe would embark on a different ship then most of them there.

We all opened up the book, the first and felt magic pulsing in our veins.

It was there that we say the trio being formed.

For me and many more it was there I began my journey on that ship.

Most agreed but a majority fell away by the time that the third had come out to play.

Doubting Thomas’s they were in our eyes. JKR would see us through or so we would say.

So we held on with a faith and a hope that some thought quite mad.

But we bared through the Yule Ball and all of it’s pain.

We say the greened eyed monster and knew right then and there that things had changed.

Still we believed that Harry could be the only one for her.

The fifth came along and more proof there was in front of us.

Maybe it was Grawp or the bond that they shared but we believed that triumph was near.

But alas along came the sixth and crushed our hopes and dreams.

We’re riding a sunken ship they say but we’re still alive so must only be the doubter who jumped away.

My friends laugh and they say “Your ship is sunk. Move along to another one.” but I see in their eyes that for a time they too believed in the older ways.I will always believe in this ship

Aww thankies anora much love ppls! thankies

Heres another:

Hermione's POV:
I know every smile,
I know every look,
How could anyone possibly overlook,
a person like you?
So honest an true,
I know evey tear is a symbol of pain,
I just want you to know that it drives me insane,
To know that I can stop the pain if I could just tell you the truth,
That I I love you!
The words that I have to say are all inside me,
and I have the choice to give you my being,
To give you a chance to tear me apart,
To give you a good close up look into my heart,
To take one good look at the tears that weld up inside my eyes,
every time I think of you I have to look at the skies,
and hope, just hope that your okay,
because promises me nothing when your gone away...
The rain like my tears have much sorrow,
I can't possibly wait till another tomorrow!
I'm pouring my soul into this!
I want to be the one who shares your kiss!

I just want you to know your tears are my fears and my fears consist of you,
and if you ever died I'd be dead too...

Gorgeous poems! They're fantastic, and very touching! Well done!

Wow, that poem is very touching. Brought tears to my eyes. I love it.

the one I wrote or the one HHrfan wrote?

These poems are great! I enjoyed reading them. Anyway...I thought I'd give it a try myself. It was so hard to "transfigurate" my thoughts into a poem and to find the right rhymes, so please, be gentle...it's my first poem.


I've never thought I'd meet someone
Who would change my life like you did, so far.
My heart that spins around your tiny form
Doesn't care that you're a Muggle born
For you were always there for me
Caring and helping continously.
You entered my life and from that very minute
I couldn't imagine my life without you in it
You helped me a lot along these years,
Putting yourself in danger and pushing away your fears
I've learned to trust your good advices
And even when you're not around you're in my conscience
Thanks to you I finally discovered LOVE...
It's something that comes from friendship and trust,
It's not a crush and neither lust.
It's sad I had to find it so late,
When it was right there, in front of my face.
I saw you cry and it pained my heart
I wanted to hug you, to bring your smile back,
To throw away those tears of sadness,
To have you back and even your bossiness
Though it drives me crazy when you nag me constantly,
I like it, I miss it, I need you deeply.
For you're the reason I am alive
Without you I probably wouldn't have survived.
I have my hopes you feel the same,
Because I need you with me...
So, please, stay...

AWWWW!!!see it wasn't so bad!! You did great! so don't worry about other ppl judging cuz that was BRIlLLIANT!


Love Always,
Stephanie your fellow Harmonious shipper

Lovely poem Irys_june! It's really brilliant, especially as it's your first poem!

Harrys POV:

My scars can never fade,
and I'm lost in this charade(SP?),
I dont know where to go,
who to love, or who to know...
Everyone I trusted turned their back on me,
Except for only one special being,
she turned my insides out--and I never, ever knew,
but she always knew who I was, shes my wish upon a star come true,
She's the shining light, that always lead me through,
all of the bad times, and all of the new,
I can not thank her enough--Oh, how I love her so--
There are so many things that I simply just let go...
I lost her forever--and I cannot turn back--
I left her behind and she's the love that i lack,
I wish I'd known that many years before,
but know I'm only heart broken, with a soul so sick and sore,
"I'd give up all I have to just be here with you,
I dont want all this fame--I just want the honest truth...
did you ever love me in our youth?"
now I'll never ever know because your with him...
and I just another lost soul--who's hanging by the skin.

Hermione POV:

I never thought that I'd love you,
I thought we'd never be--
I guess I'm just a more of a total wreck,
than you'd ever see,
I've never felt my heart beat so wildly in my chest,
I've never felt the word love be so stressed...
but you'll never know how it feels inside,
because Im to afraid to show you where my heart resides,
you'll never know the brightness you give everytime you call my name...
you'll never know how I wish you'd love me the same...
I want to wait it out a bit,
see how well our names fit...
while Im writing down your name next to mine,
and see that It fits just fine...
Soon enough you'll know the truth and I might become yours for the taking,
but lets see what I can do first to get your feelings waking,
Just to see who you love;
if Im the one your thinkin of--
I hope I am because every day you are on my mind--
please dont break my heart, and leave the little peices on the ground for me to find...

Thank you so much for your nice words! I'm glad you liked it.

I've read your poem *harryandhermionesdaughter* and it was really good. Keep these poems comming guys!

I am...touched! It's all brilliant! Keep it up guys!!!

I wish I had half your talent! Your poems are beautiful!! I hope that all of these poems - with the permission of the poet, of course - are being archived on this website. This way, when we feel like reading some H/Hr poetry, we'll know exactly where we can get our fix.

Keep up the great work.

Don't say that! Be positive Im sure your a great writer! Go on try it out! Im sure you'll do great! Remember dont knock it till you try it! And thanks for the complement

That's a gorgeous poem harryandhermionesdaughter! It's very touching.

I've been watching this thread for a little bit because I love poetry (especially love poetry!) but I've kinda been afraid to try. I haven't had english classes since highschool.

You were my first friend
You knew me at a glance
You knew when I needed laughter
quietness
to think things out
to shout

You were my friend first
But then I found romance
And I could not say I needed things like longing looks
softly worded feelings
gentle touches on the hand
To be understood and to understand

First, you were my friend
Second, my partner in the age-old boy-girl dance
I didn't know the steps I needed to do for love
for joy
for friendship loyal and true
for...you. Just you.

You were only my friend at first
...until I took a chance

awww...see that wasn't so bad! Im not quite Graduated yet...( middle school to be exact) but that was GREAT! Dont be ashamed to put yourself out!

All smilies Stephanie

~MY SHIP~
There's not a star in the sky or a day that passes by,
that could stop my pumpkin pie,
Not the darkness or the storm,
could stop our almighty reform,
Not an anvil or lust,
could stop our everlasting trust,
Not Ginny nor Ron,
could make me change the way I've gone.
I ship what I ship, and I ship it for love,
I ship it because thats the love I think of,
Disagree if you will,
but nothing will bind us still,
for in our hearts we know our path,
and we know which love is meant to last


Love ya lots,
Sincerely your fellow shipper



Aww...thankies

Hermione's POV:

Tonights the night I take my chance,
I wont give any thought, I'll just follow the dance,
I'll let my self fall into your eyes,
let myself into your skies,
I look at you and see myself, I dont even wonder why,
there is only one reason, one that i am unable to deny,
I hold on to hope, and I hold on to trust,
and I hold on to this knowing its not just lust,
I give you my heart and every bit of my soul,
and I love you to death, your heart is my goal...

harryandhermionesdaughter, great poems!


Claudia

Awww...thankies ^^ I really appreciate the positive feedback ppl thank you...

Sincerly,
~Steph~

Wow, nice stuff so far, HarryHermioneFan123 and harryandhermionesdaughter! You've got me revved up-as a matter of fact, somebody play a beat, because I want to see if I can add something a little more forceful to this...

Still remember that day when I found out about
The mother-bleeping interview-it had me bombed out
Felt like somebody close to me had passed away
Then Kanye West reminded me to get up and say

What I feel to the world and not to lay low
He inspired me to not just speak from my soul
But to funnel my feelings into a verse
Or two, and I ain't leavin' if not in a hearse

Found an anvil, homey? Then I'll bring my hammer
And a piece of red-hot verse! Yes, ma'am, yes, sir,
Call me a soldier-my pen is my sword, so don't trip
Or I'll say it loud-I will go to war for this ship

And if you ask, "Why you on the mic with this rhyme?"
It's Harry and Hermione, like, the best of all time
Me and my boys and girls, we look at 'em and find
A friendship that's now love that's one of a kind

Are you hatin'? Sorry, but we spit the truth and we know it
And we ain't afraid to show it-you busters better stow it
We ain't never in a funk, our ship is never sunk
So zip your lips or we'll turn you out like a fake punk

I really love this one Good job!

I remember a time when the saying opposites attract was not quiet so true.

Really? Because 'opposites attract' is a really, really old archetype in romance. That's the reason I don't like the idea of R/Hr. It's so cliched.

The poem's sweet anyway.

dang you all are amazing maybe I'll write one *goes to find inspiration*

Thanx I havent been on in a while so...well anyways thanx Im really flattered!




lol Thankz and ur poem was funny again thankz I love to write but I really appreciate the positive feedback ! It helps alot to develop more poems

I am truly astounded by the talent on this thread - amazing poems everyone. I've loved reading them and i have a huge smile on my face now.

Thanks we all apreciate the positive feed back! :thumbsup:

Doth thou know what is to come next?
Doth thou know that tis in thy text?



~Tip our Hats~

We hold on to the a chance,
and we tip our hats,
to the one who give us a name of shame,
for they know not of our burning flame,
We burn like a fire that can't be burnt out,
for we are the one's who hold on the our belief's without a single doubt,
You may throw it in our faces now, but you have yet to see,
how we are to stand in line and hold on to a single belief.

By:HarryandHermionesdaughter
Title: tip our hats

MOD NOTE: merging this into a related thread
~gal-texter / Pen 8May2008

Awwwwwwwwww, i was at poetry.com searching for my lame-o poems~~

and i found this poem called The Meaning of Friendship by Amy Burke Wong~

The Meaning Of Friendship

I know that I am dear to you
It's not very hard to see
I could not live without you
And you could not live without me

Friendship is forever
Or at least that's what they say
But ours will last much longer
Even past our dying day

If ever you are stranded
In real life or in your mind
Just simply call on me for help
I won't be far behind

I realize we've grown apart
But really it's okay
Because deep down I know inside
Our Friendship grows each day

I wrote this poem to let you know
Just how much you mean to me
Well here you have it, I've said it now
Friends foever we will be

Amy Burke Wong

Copyright ©2006 Amy Burke Wong

I just thought I'd share this ^^


Amy

MOD NOTE: merging this with a related thread. Please refer to this other mod note.
~gal-texter / Pen 8May2008

I figured that we could have a small contest, anyone is welcomed to submit a poem. And everyone is entitled to vote. There are no limitations to what you are allowed to write other than the rating of course, which we should all know by now. But just in case you don't, no poems that are to explicit. Anyway, there are loads of ways to write and no one to stop you so go out there and have some fun!

Here is what I'm submitting:

Title: None
Genre: Angst/Romance
Shippings: Harry and Hermione.
Ignoring DH: No.

My love didn't die because of that day,
because my decision cannot sway,
doesn't mean that it just goes away.
You secretly broke my heart,
and yet this love, it cannot die.
I see you know, with her, smiling that brilliant smile,
but I do not want to hurt or cry.
for all these fears in my head,
For all those lies that I said,
the biggest was: "I don't love you!"
It was a lie, it could never be true,
But if I had but one wish,
I would wish only to fall out of love with you.

You are my scar, my weakness and pain,
it is only you that has driven me insane.
I desperately want to fall out of this love,
I want you to stop being all I think of!
I hate being vulnerable to my fears,
and I hate how you make me shed these invisible tears.
You walk around with a smile,
the one for which I would walk for miles.
The face that I alone would die for,
the only one that can peirce my core.
My heart beat weakens, its to far from my grasp.
And nothing is anything when its without you,
because everything I had was all the things you do.
Then I lower the bar, and I go for her,
even when you're the only one who could make my heart stir.

i dont know about you guys but i love poetry so... heres mines..

It's based on that part in HBP where H/G kiss and Harry turns to Hermione and sees her smiling.. but this is about what that "smile" was really about...
warning: a bit angsty...

Faking a Smile
you turn around and gaze at me,
I'm holding back my tears while
I'm faking a smile so you
wont know how i truly feel
I can't beleive I've lost my shot
the one thing I truly wanted,
is out of reach and can't be caught
I was ready to tell you how i truly feel
i finally packed up the courage and hope I needed
but that all came crashing down on me
when i saw you kissing her

Now it hurts sitting next to you
knowing i can't have you
for what i feel is more that a crush
and i dont know what to do
because i cant love anyone
quite the way i love you.

I suck at poetry... here goes nothing (after DH crapilogue)

Veritaserum
Though we aren't together in the end,
Know you're more than just a friend,
Even when I’m not next to you,
I’ll always be yours through and through,
Through your emerald eyes I see,
Loyalty, trust and harmony,
I wrongly chose the safe illusion,
Please forgive my misguided delusion,
Like a phoenix rising from scarlet fire,
My love will grow stronger and higher,
These feelings I can never kill,
For I love the Boy Who Lived
...and forever will.

hey people!

haven't written in the forums for a while.. (i think :S) LOL
but i seriously want to write a poem but i cant think of a topic. Now anybody, throw me as many topics/ideas as you want! i seriously need some! if its h/hr related... i'll love you forever! please give me some!

Wow, that's hardcore. I love the poem. It's totally Harmonian.

Mine is not the same. The style, definitely is not, but I think it's just as angsty -

No Bravery

Sometimes I believe that I'm not a true Gryffindor.
I know if I ever confessed this,
Everyone would say that I'm being crazy, insane,
They tell me, "You've been so brave,
"You've followed him, putting your life at stake, your family in peril,
"And you say you're not brave?"

If they knew the real reason - well, they don't.
And in a way, I'm glad they don't.
For it was not because of bravery I followed him; no, it was not!
It was love. There is no bravery in putting yourself in peril for him
If love is there to carry you through - well, love is blind,
And you are oblivious to anything else,
As long as you are with him - there can be no bravery in this.

And so, any danger I have encountered, any peril I have faced
To me, it was not peril. It was for him,
And there is nothing I would do for him,
Ever since that fateful day, when he came to help rescue me,
And then offered his friendship.

I fear I am selfish, and do not dare to confess
My true feelings. I only want him to be happy.
And so, I would break my heart into a million pieces,
Rather than to let his break.

'Would he return my love?' I sometimes ponder
Upon this question. I dare not hope it would be a 'Yes'.
Yet sometimes I wish to confess to him the true extent of my feelings.
I drop him hints, but he never catches on; nor does anyone else,
I am too subtle.

I wish - but, there is no point in wishing.
He is so happy with her now, I think,
Yet sometimes I think it is a façade. But there is evil in that thought.
I cannot ruin his happiness now.

So, I try to dim my feelings for him.
After years of doing so, forever seems easy enough.
I have become a good actress.
It is impossible for them to realize my true feelings.
I will try to find true happiness, I will grasp for love.
I know there is someone who loves me.
This someone is the only other who has an inkling of my true feelings.
I will turn to him.

There is no bravery in what I have done and am doing.
I am following someone else, using him, and am never confessing to anyone
Of how I feel about him.
And after this, I will die before ever confessing this again,
I fear that this revelation would shock him, and his world crash.
In fact, everyone's life would crash - everyone we know and care and love;
They would not be able to accept it.
I fight against Destiny, and I cannot win.
I have a place in life, and everyone believes it is not with him.
It kills me, but I have run away from the fight.
I have not yet begun fighting, and I have already given up.
There is no bravery in me.

So....... i'm kind off new at this but i'll give it a try......

An empty space is all that’s left
The shell of what was
And………… what could’ve been

In all the years that I’ve known them it was supposed to be the trio
And yet what I see was them……. just them
I see her worrying for him and him doing the same
Yeah I know...
They both did that to their other best friend
But I always saw that inkling line that separates their actions towards each other and towards him

To me… just a bystander
It was heartbreaking when I saw them destroy each others hope of what was to happen
I knew underneath they wanted something to happen
But they did what they thought was expected
They didn’t act on impulse they acted on the thing that wouldn’t hurt anybody but themselves

They didn’t want to be selfish

............ hope you like it!

Wow, I totally forgot I even posted this in the fourms! =~_~"= forgive me. Heh. I love everyone's poems. Unfortunately the whole contest thing didn't work out. But hey, the poetry is still awesome! Thanks for posting!

Brilliant Poem misspsycopath, mistiquefire, and Delusional&&Proud, and treehugger101

Can I submit Lyrics, alot of people put that in the same category as Poems.

If you want to that'd be great!

Hi guys, have you seen this announcement? Esp the part that says:



In fact, I still have my Apr2005 PM to Mrs. Pepper when she asked if PK could have another poetry contest. She was interested in coordinating it again. But unfortunately, the mod team was experience staffing turnovers at that time (a few mods had to leave, incl myself), so I guess she was too shy to pursue that idea with the next set of mods.

But if there's enough interest and volunteer coordinators for another contest, then sure, why not? Perhaps you guys can put a link like this in your sigs:

Here's the code: