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magnolia90
Merged threads. --Faith

Well! I'm new to this board, but not new at all to D/G, which is by far my favorite ship. I must confess i am awful at writing, so i mostly read and review. But I've noticed a few things and i want to see if others will clear them up!

1)- The color of Ginny's eyes! I have read blue, green, light brown, dark brown, almost black, almost gray... everything under the sun. I think i read one with purple, also. I know that in the movie she has blue... Just wanted to see what you all thought.

2) The attractivness of Draco!!! (hehe) Would the whole D/G ship been created if it were not for the amazing deliciosity of Tom Felton? Because, i must admit, before i saw the movie I just assumed Draco was a slimy, ugly git, with no notion of ever getting together with Ginny. Ever. Then of course the movie CoS comes along... I am sorley mistaken. I seem to be convinced that he is going to turn good because of Ginny... or to rebel against his father. Did anyone see the CoS dvd? there are some very interesting Draco/Lucius moments in the deleted scenes...

well, thats my theory! feel free to post back. woo
sky_is_blue
1) Yes, there has always been much speculation on the color of Ginny's eyes. As for me, I've always thought of them as brown. *shrugs*

2) Yes, I suppose Tom Felton did give the ship a boost, and the whole idea of Draco being attractive did reel in some fans, but for the most part, I think the ship was created because of how odd the idea was. Odd, but then again, it could make sense, with the whole "opposites-attract" cliche. I mean, I know when I first read D/G, I was thinking "What?!" but as I read the particular fic, I loved the interaction between D and G, including the rather amusing bantering. wub.gif The idea of the strange and new ship of D/G, I guess, grew and now, it's a pretty popular ship.

Jaelyss
1) Tis true that Ginny's eyes are not described at all in canon and most fanfic authors take liberities. I've read an awful lot of D/G and brown is the colour of choice for Ginny. Sometimes, "cinnamon" as they call it. I can't see her with the blue so much since the brown contemplates the red hair so well.

2) Yes, Tom Felton is quite the cutie and does boast the deliciousness of the D/G ship but most of us were into D/G long before the movies came about. Draco is still devastatingly handsome in all the fics of course, his features are so very cold that people must make him good looking.
steel lily
Actually, Ginny's eyes are brown. Do the shade all you like, but there's a passage somewhere about Ginny's brown eyes peeping at Harry. I'm FAAAR too lazy to find it. *smirks lazily*
Jaelyss
I stand corrected. It's been much too long since I've read canon. Lexicon says Ginny has brown eyes. Look through the chapter (CoS 3) but skimmed it without actually finding anything. Ah, well.
SilverFangs
1) Yup, Ginny's has brown eyes and I think I should give you all the excerpt from chapter 3 CoS:
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They slipped out of the kitchen and down a narrow passageway to an uneven staircase, which wound its way, zigzagging up through the house. On the third landing, a door stood ajar. Harry just caught sight of a pair of bright brown eyes staring at him before it closed with a snap.

"Ginny," said Ron. "You don't know how weird it is for her to be this
shy. She never shuts up normally -"


2) Well, I when I read the book for the first time I imagined Draco to be a pale, scrawny boy and definitely unattractive. Tom Felton did make me think that Draco can be cute and sexy but I have to say I had the idea of D/G from canon (I wonder why..must be my wild imagination). It's the incident in the bookshop that made me paused and thought how ironic and hillarious it will be if the two of them end up together! After that, I started hunting for D/G fanfics (in fact, I entered the HP fanfiction world because of D/G).
solemn pessimist
1. Yeah, so anyone writing D/G, no viloet eyes here! (Only magicked contacts?)

2. I never really had a thing for Tom Felton, but I like D/G. He's fine and all, but I prefer Draco's personality mix over their physical appeal. I'm not that unhappy they're changing Felton as I was never really attached to him. Woo for canon!Draco!
JadedHHrFan
Does it really matter so much that Ginny's eyes are a keyword to the D/G relationship? I do not think so, as we acquire more knowledge about Ginny's personality and of course her appearance, we will know. It's like the rant about Harry's scar, Rowling doesn't necessarily tell us where his scar is, same with Ginny's eyes. If Bonnie Wright's eyes were blue, then Ginny Weasley's eyes are blue? Is that reasonable enough? Well, I don't think so, personally. If Ginny's eyes resembles to that of the other redheads in her family, then yes, her eyes would feasibly be blue. Or aqua... or cyan... or turquoise or another shade of blue if I don't have to depict furthermore. And so, the prattle about Ginny's eyes goes on...

As for Tom Felton, absolutely NO. I don't think his facial features had helped in anyway the developement of D/G. He is simply a juvenile adolescent acting, he is like our second Draco beyond. Maybe, just maybe, his apperance traits are similiar to that of Draco's but I don't think it really helped in anyway... simply before and after the movie, I always had thought Ginny and Draco are quite destined for each other.
vanillapuf
Uno: Ginny's eyes - definitely brown. We've established as much. Personally, I don't think it really matters at all...

Dos: Tommerz - well, I thought D/G from the first time I read the books, before the film came out and lovely Tom made an appearance. I confess, I am a big Tom fan. I think he boosted D/G a teensy bit, but no more than he must have boosted all the other ships which feature Draco darling. But I also must point out that I don't picture Tom when reading Draco fanfiction. I don't think they should change him in the film - personally I believe him to be the best child actor in the entire series - but we all differenciate Draco from Tom.

But he's lovely eye candy for fanart manip. and avatars. Hehehe.
waffleprincess
One thing that annoys me about D/G fics is that most writers seem to chane the colour of Ginny's hair, it can't be just ginger.

EG:
"her hair was now a deep shade of red, not ginger like her brothers"

"Ginny had been out in the sun and her hair had gotten blonde highlights"

"Ginny has gone goth and died her hair black"

another thing is

"Ginny had grown up alot over the summer. She was now a DD bra size, and had grown 10inches... " (then the hair thing!)

HELLO... how many peole do you know that change beyond recognition over the summer.
Yeh she might have grown up, become more of a woman, gotten more curvy, lost her virginity, and maybe died her hair... but IT DIDN'T HAPPEN IN SIX WEEKS!!!!

lol.

what annoys you?
InTheStars
When Draco turns into a "white hat" in .5 seconds! Or when the author completely throws Harry into the background. Or when she/he makes Ron the over overprotective guy. I mean, it's inevitable he'd be upset, but I hate it when they overexagarate it until the point he becomes the bad guy. Great topic.

BTW, Welcome to Portkey! *hands over a muffin and a peice of pumpkin pie* If you were a browser before, you know what that means. It's just a welcoming gesture. smile.gif I added in the muffin part, though. biggrin.gif Muffins are to D/G as to pumpkin pie is to H/Hr here.

~Faith~
waffleprincess
That's so true... like when they have Ron plotting the downfall of our fave couple... it's a little OTT... i really really hate is when Draco is out of character, and goes all soppy on us. It's kinda ok to change Ginny cos in the books she doesnt really have that much of a personality but you can't just make Draco all nice! He's hot when he's a prick!

katie x
where_is_truth
I'm afraid I'm guilty of throwing Harry into the background, but with good reasons-- one, that I don't write Harry very well, and two, that I don't like H/Hr *ducks flamethrowers pointed her way,* so I write that poorly, as well. However, I'd like to think my fics are none the worse for it.
I don't really care for D/G fics that have no real rhyme or reason given to why Draco and Ginny get together.
RyokoJesse
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I don't really care for D/G fics that have no real rhyme or reason given to why Draco and Ginny get together.


*nods emphatically*

And I cant stand it when people dont realize Draco HATES Ginny. He may not know her personally, but he hates her anyways because she's a Weasley, and he's taunted ehr before. In a lot of fics they make him be stalking her for the longest time. They run inot each other in the hall once, and suddenly he cant hold back any longer and has to confess his love. *grr*

Although, I can handle one-shots that are supposed to be pointless, because it's just all meaningless fluff for fun. Jsut Draco cant be too soft and mushy.

~Ryoko~
andFiend
Personally, I dislike fics that have Ginny go to america/vist an american penpal/have an american stay with her and suddenly become totally different. The influence of america isn't going to make Ginny magically OOC. Like a slut. Or a goth. Just my two cents.

where_is_truth
Which brings up a whole other thing... fics that are SO insanely OOC it's not even funny. It just kills me. I know I've used storylines in which Draco has had some sort of angsty interest in Ginny in the past, but I'm not one to just randomly throw them in together.
I also absolutely abhor fics that make Draco sound like an idiot, or really, this applies to all fics-- the characters all speak fairly intelligently, and a lot of times in these stories they're suddenly slang-y all over the place and sounding completely... well, out of character.
RyokoJesse
Yes! And then sometimes they sound TOO intelligent! Then I feel like I'm dealing with a really fandomized Draco/Ginny/etc. which can either be really bad or really fun. smile.gif (You all know how sexy fandom!Draco can get. wink.gif )

~Ryoko~
InsipidNight
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Personally, I dislike fics that have Ginny go to america/vist an american penpal/have an american stay with her and suddenly become totally different. The influence of america isn't going to make Ginny magically OOC. Like a slut. Or a goth. Just my two cents.


I agree. I hate those fics where they make Ginny turn into some foreign exchange student to an American school. It's just so annoying. I also hate the ones where "American witches come to Hogwarts". Ugh...Mary-Sues have got to be the worst things ever ! SuperAngry.gif I also hate OOC fics...with Ginny turning suddenly VERY BEAUTIFUL over the summer and EVERY boy is going after her, but in the end Draco wins her heart. I just don't see how those fics work out. Maybe it's because I avoid reading those...blegh.

--Sandie--
where_is_truth
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You all know how sexy fandom!Draco can get.


I think there's just something unbelievably fun and sexy about being able to make Draco be however we want him to be...
As long as he's not being any of the things that were earlier stated as annoyances... biggrin.gif
Sakura1287
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I don't really care for D/G fics that have no real rhyme or reason given to why Draco and Ginny get together.


Amen to that. That is the cliche of all cliches.

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and a lot of times in these stories they're suddenly slang-y all over the place and sounding completely... well, out of character.


Oh my, I hate hate hate american slang in HP fanfiction. I can't even give an explanation, it's that terrible. It's obvious why it's stupid.

XTina
waffleprincess
lol. I think we should show every newcomer to D/G fanfic this list... then maybe we wont have to suffer!

i hate it when people do one-shots which are like "have fight kiss fall in love babies the end."
it's awful.... and when Lucius suddenly loves Ginny and cant wait till she joins the family YUCK!

katie x
InTheStars
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Lucius suddenly loves Ginny and cant wait till she joins the family YUCK!


*horrified* I've never read that, but I don't want to!


~Faith~
RyokoJesse
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lol. I think we should show every newcomer to D/G fanfic this list... then maybe we wont have to suffer!


GAH! good idea! *hugs waffleprincess* You're a genius!! *skips over to the website thread*

~Ryoko~
waffleprincess
lol, does anyone else have a problem with Draco and Harry suddenly becoming friends. I mean fair enough they could be civilised to each other, but they can't just sudenly make friends as though they have never had a problem with each other. It's almost as bad as when Draco and Ginny are in love after one sentence!

katie x
Sakura1287
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Lucius suddenly loves Ginny and cant wait till she joins the family YUCK!

*horrified* I've never read that, but I don't want to!


Me either, Stars, and I am very glad, too. wink.gif

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It's almost as bad as when Draco and Ginny are in love after one sentence!


Ahaha... I can see it now...

"It was another new year at Hogwarts. The welcome feast was only just beginning, but Draco and Ginny had already admitted their hidden love to eachother and were snogging in the Potions Dungeon. The End."

laugh.gif

XTina

waffleprincess
that exactly what i mean... lol, its amazing how people aren't ashamed to show other some of their writing!
SkewlOfRock
AH! I've never read anything where Lucius wanted Ginny in the family! And I don't want to, that's just...wrong! And falling in love after one line...some new writers write like that...but...maybe they just need a mentor or something, and they probably haven't heard of a betta. *Sigh* I remember those days smile.gif

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SkewlOfRock
waffleprincess
have you honsetly never read fanfiction in which Lucius was reformed and loved everything including Ginny?

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InTheStars
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have you honsetly never read fanfiction in which Lucius was reformed and loved everything including Ginny?


No! That's... wrong.

I hate fictions that have them already in love in the first frickin' sentence! Where's the fun in that?! I think authors do that because they don't wanna go through the trouble of writing how they got together, because it's a bit difficult.



~Faith~
waffleprincess
yeh that's true. i don't read fic's where they are already together it's just not as interesting to find out how they got together.

bad example of this can be found at

* link removed by mods *

there really should be rules against this sort of thing!

katie x
InTheStars
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there really should be rules against this sort of thing!


*shakes head* I don't know what to say to this... *is distracted from the muffled yelling beside her* iDraco, just- go ahead- *takes tape off his mouth*

(Note: iDraco is my Inner Draco; I keep tape over his mouth because he talks too much about things he shouldn't. wink.gif )


iDraco: -ruddy fiction! "um???" "Um?????" I don't say "um!!!!" I'm a Malfoy! That was the tackiest thing I've ever read! In front of everyone, I embarrassed myself like that! Someone must have spiked the punch! This is wrong-
Me: I know, Draco. I don't really usually mean this when I say it, but I do this time. I'm sorry I made you go through that with me...
iDraco: If you ever- ever- make me read something like that ever again-
Me: I've learned my lesson, Drakkie.
iDraco: Stop calling me that, you-
Me: *replaces tape over his mouth again* whistling.gif
iDraco: shutup.gif



~Faith~
waffleprincess
OoOoOh yeh... i thought of another thing!!!!!!

"Ginny Weasley was living in NYC after becoming a world famous model!"
like why would she want to do that... she's a mega cool witch!

"Ginny had gotten a secret inheritance that her parents didn't know about so now she is mega rich" She would so not be that selfish!

"Athur was Minister for magic"
YEH... cos you go from a complete nothing to the most important man in wizarding Britain (save Dumbledore)

i hate stupid things like this that make the Weasleys REALLY RICH... it takes away half the plot! What could Draco say if he wasn't slaggin off her poorness

katie x mad2.gif
SkewlOfRock
I was just about to post about some of that! Like how her parents got a lot of money and they are rich! And I couldn't even follow the story line of that link, I didn't get it! I'm trying to think of some of the really bad things I've read *Hmmm* Gr, my stupid long term memory! whistling.gif
waffleprincess
i try not to remember bad fanfics... there are to many of them. WE MUST STOP IT!

the ultimate D/G site would not have any of this horrible stuff on it. It will be hard work to acheive it! lol!

i also hate it when Ginny is really good friends with Cho Chang... ARGH she is whiney and annoying in both canon and fanon... IT WOULDNT HAPPEN! SuperAngry.gif

katie x
SkewlOfRock
OMG! I know! I remember when I read the 5th book I wanted to slap Cho! She cried so much! And she was jealous of Hermione! OH come on Harry/Hermione are best friends! And she tried to make Harry jealous by saying that guy who was snogging the girl asked her out! Dude...uck...she's so... mad2.gif Oh! The stories where Draco/Ginny randomly meet...like um there's one that is out now where Draco threw a MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE and Ginny found it! I mean...come on!
waffleprincess
lol. i think Faith inner Draco might have something to say about MALFOY'S and messages in bottles... how degrading!

lol... i think the person who wrote that fic must be a bit deluded!

katie x
SkewlOfRock
Yeah! Message in a bottle, they're not pirates! Hmm *Must check ff.net for the bad ones she has read...ridden?...read* I HATE PAST TENSE!
waffleprincess
lol. i keep thinking of annoying things... i hate it when people ghange tense all the time! all the bad fics do it!

katie x
SkewlOfRock
Yeah! Like every few paragraphs its says ~*~ GINNY POV ~*~ then its like ~*~ DRACO POV ~*~ then ~*~ NORMAL POV ~*~ Grr, they repeat the same stuff over when they do that too! And also, there is this sequel to some fic out...the regular was From Sarah With Love and the sequel was...Family Matters. I...have to say...I don't like that fic, it moves really fast! And also I can't stand it when people have a ton of exclimation marks! like !!!!!!!!!!! "I don't believ you did that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" That's not needed! And then they use the apostrophe things instead of Quotation marks when someone is talking...
InTheStars
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lol. i think Faith inner Draco might have something to say about MALFOY'S and messages in bottles... how degrading!


iDraco: *is disturbed* I'd never be that desperate. I can have anyone I want. user posted image
Me: *startled* What happened to the tape???
iDraco: twisted.gif *twirls his wand in his hand* I'm a wizard, remember?
Me: dry.gif



~Faith~
SkewlOfRock
I also think that when people write fics they should make the names unique. I know that like Fred/George, and all the other Weasley's names are normal...except for Virginia...which is why I think Ginny will have something important to do... smile.gif Just because of her name! It's a unique name! She's not going to go to waist before the end.....wait...is Virginia her name in the books? blush.gif I actually dont remember reading it! I have been believing a lie this entire time!
waffleprincess
lol... Dont let him sneak up on you like that Faith... he might ruin our plans for him! *evil laugh*

i read the first chapter of from srah with love and i didnt like it!

katie x
SkewlOfRock
I never even read From Sarah With Love...just the sequel and boy..I don't like it! innocent.gif
waffleprincess
lol. i think it was the summary that was the worst bit... it was just silly!
i thought "knock on the Sky" was horrendous as well... i only read 1 chapter tho

katie x
SkewlOfRock
I kind of like knock on the sky, but it did move fast...Just a bit whistling.gif
waffleprincess
lol. ah well each to their own. Have you read The Source by luckyducky777 on ff.net. NOW that is a GOOD fic!

katie x
SkewlOfRock
I don't think so! What's it about? Have you read The Shotgun Bride? I think its not very D/G but its funny, AU though.
InTheStars
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lol... Dont let him sneak up on you like that Faith... he might ruin our plans for him! *evil laugh*


Oh, no, he won't. Draco is a D/G shipper. He seriously fancies her, even thinks he can kid the unknowing into thinking they really are a couple.

iDraco: dry.gif You ruined it.
Me: Ruined what? Nothing to ruin.
iDraco: Shut it or I'll curse you.
Me: If you curse me, you curse yourself. You live in me, you idiot.
iDraco: *more insults*
Me: rolleyes.gif



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also think that when people write fics they should make the names unique.


I hate when they pick just any old name.


Anyway, since our Mods have all but disappeared, me and Sakura sort of took over when it came to this:

Stay ON topic, guys.



~Faith~
waffleprincess
lol sorry Faith. any way as we where saying. how shall we create this ULTIMATE BAD FIC, maybe we could starta new thread for people to stick cookies on for their bad fic, and the choose the worst and just keep narrowing it down until we fnd the worst. 1eye.gif
i don't know though... what do you guys think?

katie x
SkewlOfRock
Hmm I hate it when...Well I'm not sure if anyone has said this, but when Ginny goes away for the summer and comes back a whole new person. I also don't like when Ginny wears really skimpy outfits...Well unless it goes with the story, but when she wears a t-shirt that says like, 'devil' or when people say she's wearing ABERCROMBIE! It bugs me...little things annoy me...but hey! ITS THE TOPIC! biggrin.gif *Pats herself on the back for staying on topic*
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