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Musique
YEA TOTALLY!!

So...anyone wanna continue???
GemmaH121
Yeah great post. I'm so caught up in all my plot bunnies at the moment I can't continue it, but I do hope we can revive this RR it's a wonderful story.

Gems
Dark Sorcerer SEB
I'm sorry, Musique, but my intention was for Harry and Hermione to end up together. You were right about the hiding the feelings from Voldemort, etc. But I didn't understand why you called Harry a small-hearted person. To me, that sounds like you're trying to make the two of them hate each other. Harry's got a good heart and so does Hermione. The only thing in between them and their dying passion for each other is Voldemort. And why did Hermione and Harry run away? I don't understand that. If this sounds mean, I don't mean to be, I'm just saying that your explanation is a little blurry and unclear.
By the way, Gemma, I'm a guy, not a girl. Easy Internet mistake, I know. Keep adding. It's getting good. Or, maybe Musique is planning for something. In that case, keep up the good work, because you've got me in complete suspense. I like how this story is coming along, and I really appreciate you guys taking your time to help me write this. I love how this is going. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEase keep writing.

Dark Sorcerer SEB sorcerer.gif cool.gif sorcerer.gif thumbup.gif

P.S. Anybody who got to see Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban in the movies give this combination of faces beside your name signature : sorcerer.gif cool.gif sorcerer.gif thumbup.gif
Anybody who hasn'y seen it give this combination of faces : innocent.gif SuperAngry.gif whistling.gif SuperAngry.gif

My combo of smilies is at my name

lol

Thanx. Keep posting. I love how this story's coming along.
Musique
Umm...wow...i'm sorry.

you can just replace my part if you want. i mean like did it suck that bad? i thought it was okay.

but whatever this isnt my story, so dark sorcerer, if you dont like it then why dont you replace mine?

im so sorry just forget i even posted it. blushing.gif
Dark Sorcerer SEB
By the way, does anybody know how to add a story to the fanfiction section? I hope someone does, because I want to start posting stories in the fanfic section also. For anyone who does know, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!! sorcerer.gif thumbup.gif
Musique
yea i know.

but i think that after i completely apologized and all and you didnt react at all, i dunno if i should tell you.

but since im not the type of person to write this without feeling guilty, you have to go the control panel and submit an author application.
Dark Sorcerer SEB
I wasn't trying to insult you or anything, Musique, my mind was just focused on other things. Personally, I think that the others could decide about your fanfic. if most of them want it gone, then they can replace it. If not, then that's fine also. I'm really sorry if I'm making people mad. I hope this problem is solved and we can continue the story. I was not intentionally ignoring you and I am truly sorry if you thought I was. But could you please tell me how to post fanfic in the "Stories" section?

Thank you for taking the time and patience to add your posts. Keep up the good work, and I am most grateful to everybody here. clover.gif thumbup.gif

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Musique
I told you.

You go to your control panel and submit an application!!! cool.gif
digital_dodo
OK now that we got that sorted tongue.gif
IS ANY ONE GOING TO CONTINUE????
I was going to do this myself except I have the minor problem of not being able to write a good fanfic without I ending up Reta Sketter (sp?) ruling the world so
that Is why I make other people write for me (look in challanges)

Musique, your story wasn't that bad, It just wasn't cannon or what we expected blush.gif.

Come on people!!!! Does anyone even come on here anymore?!?!?!
THIS IS THE FIRST POST HERE IN OVER A MONTH!!!
DISGRASFUL PEOPLE!!!user posted image

[b]PETITION

We, the people of the round robin, pledge to write on this topic a little more often (a month, reallyuser posted image) and recomend this topic area to other portkey-ers

Sign here:::::----> below[/B]
Sundari Harmony
Oh dear, okay guys we need to take in deep breaths and chill out!

Musique, it was a great update. I mean, the next person can make it really adorable where Harry turns around and does go after her, right?

We have to remember, this is a ROUND ROBIN. Everyone posts their takes on it, it isn't supposed to be predictable. Dark Sorcerer SEB, if you want this to go a certain way, just write your own fic about it. Simple as that.

digital_dodo, I'm glad you're so passionate about this RR, but just relax, people will pick this back up. Heck I may even make the next entry. Just be patient ^__^

+Sue+
Musique
*breathes in*

Phew.

Thanks, sundari hermione.

I think the reason there was so much time until a new post is the serious tension between Dark Sorcerer EB and me scaring people away.

Well, Dark Sorcerer and I are totally cool. *slaps his hand* Yup, we're cool.

I would post but I was the last post-er so someone please post already!!!
Sundari Harmony
Wee alright, here come's a post from Sue!

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Hermione couldn’t think straight, and it resulted in her not knowing where she was going. Soon she ended up at the edge of a forest. She didn’t really care at that point; she just ran in, dodging the trees, wanting to get as far away as possible.

Soon she came to a small creek running through the forest. She sank down on a boulder, exhausted. She didn’t have any tears left to cry. She picked up a stray stone from the forest floor and chucked it in to the stream. It was no use, no matter what she did, she couldn’t stop thinking about him. She buried head in her hands, willing the whole thing to never have happened. Just then she heard a rustling behind her.
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Short, I know. But I figured a nice filler that could lead to some sweet drama would be nice whistling.gif

By the way, if the fast read ever for some reason gets lost, I have the whole thing archived and edited on my computer, so far it's 8 pages long in MS Word! ^__^

+Sue+
Musique
Firsty, Sue, did I mention that I looooove your display pic? It rocks! Soo funny! And the filler, perfect. I'll let more people take a turn before I go again so someone please continue this!
Hogwarts_Sniper
More people? There's only us 4 here.... (Me, Sue, Dark Sorcerer, and Musique) And i'm kinda busy with writing a part to Anto's Challenge, so that narrow's it down to 3. Sue's just posted, that makes 2......

*Takes deep breath*

Well, I gotta go now....

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Dark Sorcerer SEB
I'm sorry for not posting in ages. Our computer crashed at my house and we have to get it fixed. I'm typing from a friend's computer.
Musique, I'm glad we got that whole issue sorted out. *high fives her hand* I'm a little confused on what's going on in the story. Sudari Harmony, I like it, but what is the rustling sound? I'm not saying there's a problem with it, I'm just asking what the sound is. I think I see where this story's going, and I really like the plot. I'll try to post some more when I have the time, but for now, keep up the good work! I really like it.

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Ps. Musique, thanks for the info about the fanfic section.
P.p.s.
HARRY AND HERMIONE 4EVER!!!!! thumbup.gif sorcerer.gif thumbup.gif sorcerer.gif

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Sundari Harmony
Lol the rustling sound can be whatever ... I left it completely open tongue.gif Could be a centaur, unicorn, evil animal, a person, whatever! It could turn in to one of those whole "Harry saving her" things *shrug*
Dark Sorcerer SEB
Cool. I like it, Sundari Harmony. Plus, Harry saving her would get them back together after they got in a fight in Musique's addition. I think I saw where Musique and you were going with this.
Well, i guess i could add a little to the story.


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Just then, she heard a rustling sound behind her....

Her heart pounded as sweat beaded down her face. Her breath became heavy and she felt her skin turn cold. Suddenly, a wisp of ice formed on the branch of a tree near her ear. She looked up as a shadowy creature towered over her. She had seen this creature in her days at Hogwarts. It was called a dementor, but she did not know why it would be at Hogwarts, for dementors were the guards to the wizarding prison of Azkaban.
It reached its bony hand out at her and instantly, she heard three people scream in her head. One was her mother, one was her father, and the other was Harry.
Or was she actually hearing Harry's voice? She became so confused that she collapsed. As the dementor towered over her, Hermione heard a faint voice yell something, and the next minute, a shining silver stag charged the dementor down. It looked down at Hermione, and Hermione saw it smile! It vanished instantly and She felt someone come over to her and cradle her head in their arms. She looked up weakly and saw Harry's sparkling green eyes.
"Oh, Hermione, PLEASE don't be dead!" he gasped.
"Shhhh," she whispered, placing her finger on his lips. She leaned up and kissed him sweetly and gently and she said, "I'm so sorry, Harry. I shouldn't have said those mean things to you."
"I love you, Hermione," Harry said, kissing her forehead.
"I love you too, Harry," Hermione replied, stroking Harry's cheek.
Some people say that there's no such thing as true love, but that's a lie, for now Harry knew that it would be okay.

How's that? I hope you guys liked it.
Keep posting. This story's getting good!

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p.s. This post is not the end of the story.
p.p.s. HARRY AND HERMIONE 4EVER!!!! thumbup.gif heart.gif thumbup.gif
Musique
Someone else post so I can add something! Hurry, people run to this thread! Faster! You call that fast?!?!?!
Sundari Harmony
Oh dear, post the next part of the story! tongue.gif Why didn't you just post it now? Lol. Anywyas, I liked that last little bit... very interesting, though it does sound like the end. Musique, I hope you got something good up your sleeve tongue.gif
WonkyKris
Mod Note: As you can see, there is a PD Easy-Read. Once I get everything organized in that thread, I want every person who posts a part to this story to post once in here, and then once in the easy read. Just let me get everything organized...but if that takes a while, just start posting there. Thanks! ~Kris
Musique
yea, i'll wait for you, but WonkyKris: you have got to tell me- who is that extremely hott guy in your picture there? he is fiiiiiine!
WonkyKris
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yea, i'll wait for you, but WonkyKris: you have got to tell me- who is that extremely hott guy in your picture there? he is fiiiiiine!


Lol!! He's Jesse McCartney, my current obsession. He's and American actor/singer. In fact, his CD just came out...

Okay, enough of the OT talk. I'll try and get to the editing the thread soon.

EDIT- Alright, I finished. Now, next person to post: post once in here and then in the ER. Thanks!
Dark Sorcerer SEB
cool. Even though it sounded like it, it was not the end. I can't post part of the story right now because i'm doing other required stuff (don't ask), but I'm sure we can think of something. How was that addition, by the way? I hope it went good with the story. I'd really like to know what you guys thought about it.
Keep up the good work!


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Harry/Hermione 4eva
Woooooooooooooooow! I've just read the Easy-Read, and WOW!!!!
This is an amazing fic! Like totally.
It's sooo sweet too. wub.gif

I can't wait for the next post...

~Bec, the HYPER mod. Hehe.

Musique
BLEHH

I had a total post written out and the stupid computer shut down.
Sundari Harmony
*gasp* Oh no! No posts since NOVEMBER?!?! *cries* *revives RR* come on! I have no idea what to do next... Musique do you remember what you were going to post? At all? crying.gif I REFUSE to let this thread die! *stomps feet*

sad.gif Anyone?

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Dark Sorcerer SEB
I'll tell Sundari Harmony why we haven't had any posts since November, and it's because nobody's made an addition to the story yet! The last story post that was made was made by me, and that was about two or three months ago. I already said that it wasn't the end.

Well, I guess I'll add a little bit more to get the ball rolling again.


* * *

Some people say that there's no such thing as true love, but that's a lie, for now Harry knew that it would be okay.

When Harry and Hermione got back to Hogwarts, there was still several people outside saying hello to old friends.
A little while later, the headmistress of Hogwarts, Professor McGonagall, came out and said, "Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for coming today. Professor Dumbledore has asked me to lead all except for two of you into the Great Hall."
She began to lead the people in, but she thrust her arm out forward when Hermione tried to go inside. "You and Mr. Potter need to see Professor Dumbledore: Immediately."

* * *

Well, I hope that was good. Please add to it

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WonkyKris
Mod Note: Dark Sorcerer SEB, could you please post your addition to the story in the Easy-Read thread? Many thanks if you could!

WonkyKris
Sundari Harmony
Hey Kris~ Do you just want me to compile it and every few posts I'll post the ER? Would that be easier? I already have it compiled anyway.

And Dark Sorcerer, it was mucho good *sigh of relief*

I suppose I can add on quick...

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Harry and Hermione shot weary glances at each other, then nodded to McGonagall. She told them the password, and then they headed towards the oh-so familiar office. "Chocolate Frog," Harry said, and the statue sprang to life, revealing a stair case. They climbed on and headed up to the office. When the came to the door, they both stopped. Harry grabbed Hermione's hand and squeezed, then raised his other hand and knocked on the door.

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Woosh!
WonkyKris
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Hey Kris~ Do you just want me to compile it and every few posts I'll post the ER? Would that be easier? I already have it compiled anyway.


Sure. If they don't do it themselves, go ahead. smile.gif
Thanks!

Kris
Dark Sorcerer SEB
Thanks, now we can get the ball rolling. Wonky Kris, I took a look at this story board that you mentioned, but I don't know how to add my posts to it. Maybe I can if you tell me how to do it.

By the way, if you guys want, I'll add a tidbit to the story


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Harry grabbed Hermione's hand and squeezed, then raised his other hand and knocked on the door.

There was no answer at first, but then, the door opened a slight bit, enough for Harry to see the smiling face of Albus Dumbledore. Then, Harry heard the headmaster's soft voice say, "Come on in, you two."


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I know it's not much, but I didn't really have time on my hands. Good luck!

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WonkyKris
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Thanks, now we can get the ball rolling. Wonky Kris, I took a look at this story board that you mentioned, but I don't know how to add my posts to it. Maybe I can if you tell me how to do it.


Just go and post it regularly, like any normal post. smile.gif
Dark Sorcerer SEB
Thanks, WonkyKris. BTW guys, how ya like my new Avatar?

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Sundari Harmony
Hey all,

I don't have time to write anything, but I'll just take care of updating the ER Dark Sorcerer, don't worry about it. I just wanted to wait till we had a few more posts before I edited mine.

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Dark Sorcerer SEB
Whoa, Whoa, whoa, whoa!!!!!!
This is June, and there haven't been any posts since March???????? mad2.gif

WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!????? lol, I'm just kidding ya guys. Well, I guess I have a little time on my hands right now, so I guess, since THERE HASN'T BEEN ONE IN MONTHS, I'll put in a post to this story. I'm so sorry to all of you guys. With the fact that I just got in my school's marching band, and I just got a summer job, my life's been a little hectic lately, but I've got a little free time. Please don't give up on this story. I know it's been long, and I'm sorry. But I know that all of us have been having issues in our lives that have kept us from our computers. Sniper, sundari, Musique, harryandhermione4eva, thanx for stickin around. You too, Kris. Can't forget you. Well here's the next part of the story.

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Then, Harry heard the headmaster's soft voice say, "Come on in, you two."


Harry and Hermione walked in and heard a squawk, one that Harry had not heard since his days at Hogwarts. He turned and saw Fawkes, Dumbledore's pet phoenix. Fawkes's eyes sparkled happily as he saw Harry and Hermione.
"Welcome, you two," said a soft voice that Harry recognized immediately. They turned and saw Albus Dumbledore standing there. "I heard of your little dementor incident in the forest, and I hope that you two are okay."
He smiled when they nodded. "Well, I'm sure you two are eager to see your friends again, so I won't keep you any longer. Just remember that you are welcome to come visit me any time you like."
So, holding hands, they walked outside to the grounds, where there were still people reuniting. Suddenly, a cold, drawling voice came from behind them.
"Well, look who it is!"
Harry and Hermione turned to see their old school rival, Draco Malfoy, strutting up to them.
"I see you're still in one piece, Potter."
"What do you want, Malfoy?"
Malfoy was about to answer when he looked down at Harry's hand, which was still entwined with Hermione's.
"I do not believe it!" he crowed, trying to stifle his maniacal laughter. "You and the Mudblood!?"
"Shut up and eat dung, Malfoy!" Hermione spat at him.
"How dare you talk to me, you filthy little Mudblood!"
Hermione rolled her eyes as he left, laughing at them.
Harry turned to her and said, "Three years, and not an inch more of maturity in that guy."
She laughed and said, "Yeah, really."
He seemed to be thinking something really intense, for he remained quiet for a good while. Kissing his cheek, she finally said, "Whatchya thinking about?"
"Hermione," he finally said after his eternity of silence. "I have something I want to show you."

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Well, I hope you liked that. Still, however, the story's not finished. I hope you guys can keep adding to it, just in case I'm not here for a while. I don't know when the next time I'll be able to post is. Also, I hope you can post to my other story, "Harry Potter and the Ceremonial Mistake."

Also, how do you guys like my Avatar?

BTW, I'm writing a story on my other computer. It's a Harry Potter fanfic book called "Harry Potter and the Torch of Black Flames." It's a very intense story of Harry's sixth year, even though I know Half-Blood Prince is coming out soon. I hope I can post it in the Fan fiction part of this website, and I hope you guys will read it. If you guys want a copy of it when it's finished, you can give me your e-mail addresses, and i can send a copy to you. Don't worry. There's no charge or anything. I'm just making copies of it for friends who would want to read it. Right now, I'm on page 235, and I'm still not even close to finished, but I'm working on it really hard, and when it's finished, if you guys want a copy, then all you have to do is send me your e-mail addresses, and you're more than welcome to a copy of it.
My email is stevebrannan@charter.net

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Dark Sorcerer SEB
i can't write my own fic about it, because I have no idea how to get into fanfics. I keep trying and it keeps telling me that i can't open a file


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laterz. sorry to get ya'll so mad about this. I keep having trouble getting internet access. this is the first time I've been able to log on in a good while. anywayz, i'll try to keep this going once i can get regular access again. laterz.

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Francesca
Hi! blush.gif It's my second post on the forum so i'm still kindda new to this smile.gif I love this story! can i try to continue the story? great job guys!
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