I Introduction
Martin Luther King Weekend…I’ve wanted to write this essay for quite awhile, so this seemed like a good time to do it! This is my first essay; where should I start? Either I’ve completely missed something or there’s something extremely weird going on in the Goblet of Fire (hopefully not the first, because then I’ll be writing this for nothing…not too good) But anyway…**prepares for dramatic pause**
“Come, Wormtail, one more death and our path to Harry Potter is clear.”
And everyone looks completely non-pulsed…big deal, you’ve read that quote about 100 times right? Ok, this may be an odd question…BUT EXACTLY WHO WAS THIS NECESSAARY MURDER? This person…that NEEDED to be killed, before they could get to Harry at the end of book four. There’s another victim in the Goblet of Fire, whose death was either never discovered or completely glossed over.
What’s still weirder is that the line is reiterated a page later and still no one notices!
“One more murder…my faithful servant at Hogwarts…Harry Potter is mine.”
It’s done quickly; JK doesn’t want us to dwell on the fact that there’s someone missing.
There’s a murder so important being planned, that Voldemort is basing his entire plan around it. Obviously, taking control of the Dark Lord’s path to Harry Potter, the death occurred sometime during the fourth book, because Voldemort found Harry at the end of it (but we all know that **winks**) And you’re probably going, yes, yes, so many people died, what on earth am I talking about? I’m questioning who possibly was so important that they needed to be out of the way before Voldemort was reborn? For the mean time, let’s call this person X.
Obviously Wormtail was the one who was supposed to be murdering someone else…
“My Lord I must speak!” said Wormtail, panic rising in his voice now. “All through this journey I have gone over the plan in my head-My lord, Bertha Jorkins disappearance will not go unnoticed for long, and if we proceed, if I murder-”I’m drawing a blank? Murder? Who, what, where!!!? Dumbledore? But he’s sorta’…still alive…Snape? Bertha Jorkins’ cousin? Animal, vegetable or mineral? I could sit and ponder who it could’ve been for hours, but this essay isn’t the proper place for that…The point is to prove to you that there’s someone out there! I’m trying to understand that one quote that nobody ever notices!
Let me first list the people who died in the course of the Goblet of Fire
II Deaths
Bertha Jorkins: We all know about her, tortured to form Voldemort’s plan of rebirth.
“I found you,” said Wormtail, and there was definitely a sulky edge to his voice now. “I was the one who found you, I brought you Bertha Jorkins.”
“That is true,” said the second man, sounding amused. “A stroke of brilliance that I would not have thought possible from you, Wormtail-though, if truth be told, you were not aware of how useful she would be when you caught her, were you?”
“I-I thought she might be useful, My Lord-”
“Liar,” said the second voice again, the cruel amusement more pronounced than ever. “However, I do not deny that her information was invaluable. Without it, I could never have formed our plan.”
But she died BEFORE Lord Voldemort talked about there being one more murder…so cross her off. Here, you have it in black and white, he needed her to FORM the plan, and it’s obvious she wasn’t the one death, our search for X continues.
Frank Byrce: Although Voldemort stated that there was one more murder that needed to take place; that had to be committed, he had absolutely no knowledge of Frank Byrce being outside of his room and that he’d be forced to kill him so that the old muggle didn’t go running to the townspeople.
“Nagini has interesting news, Wormtail,” it said.
“In-indeed my Lord?” said Wormtail.
“Indeed, yes,” said the voice. “According to Nagini, there is an old Muggle standing right outside this room, listening to every word we say.”
Frank didn’t have time to hide himself. There were footsteps, and then door of the room was flung open.
A short balding man with graying hair, a pointed nose, and small, watery eyes stood before Frank, a mixture of fear and alarm on his face. Ok, first off note this reaction. Fear and alarm on Wormtail’s face. Let’s define those words.
Fear
a. A feeling of agitation and anxiety caused by the presence or imminence of danger. (A muggle knowing of their plans?)
b. Extreme reverence or awe, as toward a supreme power. (Supreme power…old crippled man? Come on, Voldemort’s the supreme power if anything, not the reason. Cross off. )
c. A reason for dread or apprehension: (ugh…hello, u’ve got a criminal mastermind for a master and u’ve been discussing this “almighty” plan that’s going to make both you and your master more powerful than anyone’s ever imagined and this annoying little muggle hears it…RUN AWAY!!)
Alarm
1. A sudden fear caused by the realization of danger.
2. A warning of existing or approaching danger.
(Basically the same as before)
Fear in wondering exactly what the muggle heard and alarmed and anxious about what the muggle’ was going to do! This proves that, because Wormtail was so terrified at the prospect, and Voldemort, hence, really surprised, that it was entirely news to them that some old man was outside eavesdropping on them. The fact is…through the entire speech where Frank is listening, Voldemort is oblivious to his presence. Frank was unexpected. This is an additional murder to this right significant one…He wasn’t the one murder.
Barty Crouch Jr.: WRONG! Ok, he died, but we all, honest to God know that Voldemort wanted to keep him alive to make sure that he had someone loyal who would make sure he was properly redeemed. He was Voldemort’s most loyal servant, there’s no way in hell that his death was wanted by Voldemort.
“By that time my most faithful servant will have joined us…”
“I told you, Harry…I told you. If there’s one thing I hate more than any other, it’s a death eater who walked free! They turned their backs on my master when he needed them most!”
Loyalty…
“Tell me he told them, that I alone remained faithful…prepared to risk everything to deliver the one thing he wanted above all…you.”
“You didn’t…it-it can’t be you…”
“Who put your name in the Goblet of Fire under the name of a different school? I did. Who frightened off every person I thought might try to hurt you or prevent you from winning the tournament? I did. Who nudged Hagrid into showing you the dragons? I did!”
Yea…Voldemort defiantly wants him dead…yea right…should I even go on? We all know straight out, that he wasn’t this supreme murder….Mystery person X, where arth thou?
Barty Crouch Sr.: This is the most complicated part of my essay…the one possibility; the core…this death is the only one not written in stone…Voldemort needed someone to continue going to work at the ministry and to make sure that no one caught wind of anything starting to go awry in their world.
“My father was placed under the imperius curse by my master. Now my father was the one imprisoned; controlled. My master forced him to go about his business as usual, to act as though nothing was wrong.”
This is the murder that could be the possibility, maybe they wanted to keep him around long enough, but wanted him gone before the action started up? Wormtail was watching him (Wormtail is supposed to kill someone) But there’s no motive!!!
“There were periods where he knew what was happening. My master decided it was no longer safe for my father to leave the house.”
Even if they didn’t want to kill him till’ the end, why not kill him the moment they started to get suspicious of him like they did with Frank?...it just doesn’t make sense…
We also can’t neglect the fact that it was his son who killed Barty Crouch (and Not Wormtail)!
“Both of us for instance, had very disappointing fathers…very disappointing indeed. Both of us suffered the indignity, Harry of being named after those fathers. And both of us had the pleasure…the very great pleasure…of killing our fathers to ensure the rise of the Dark Order!”
Although, he is dead, it doesn’t sound very much like they really wanted this murder to take place…it just happened…
“You are in luck Wormtail,” said a cold high-pitched voice from the depths of the chair in which the owl had landed. “You are very fortunate indeed. Your blunder has not ruined everything. He is dead.”
Wormtail is fortunate, because he won’t be fed to Nagini, not because he didn’t commit the murder he was supposed to.
Ok, it wasn’t imperative to kill Crouch until HE ESCAPED! That’s when it became so important, our essay’s main conversation was way before anything had happened, before Crouch ran off to Dumbledore, it was a last resort killing this guy. They wanted to keep him alive remember! They wanted to make everyone see that he was alright; it wasn’t until he went mad that they had to do something…something they’d never intended.
Voldemort wanted to keep Barty Crouch Sr. alive at least until he had been resurrected. Cross off again!
Cedric Diggory: This was an accident; Cedric never would’ve died had Harry and he not agreed to take the cup together.
“From far away, above his head, he heard a high, cold voice say, “Kill the spare.”
A swishing noise and a second voice, which screeched the words to the night: “Avada Kedavra!”
Voldemort couldn’t foresee Cedric getting the trophy, even if we were to believe by some odd reason that Voldemort wanted to kill Cedric Diggory, he would have no way of knowing that the tournament was going to select him or that Harry would take the cup with him. It was, however much it’s sad, it’s Harry’s fault that he’s dead.
“He wanted me to bring him back,” Harry muttered, it seemed important to explain this. “He wanted me to bring him back to his parents.”
Let’s see, have we run out of people? Just to be safe…
III Possible Attempted Deaths
Alastor Moody: Moody was to be kept alive at all costs.
“I kept him alive under the imperius curse. I wanted to be able to question him. To find out about his past, learn his habits so that I could fool even Dumbledore.”
“The imposter needed of course to keep the real Moody close by, so that he could continue making the potion. You see his hair…the imposter has been cutting it off all year.”
Barty Crouch needed to make the polyjuice potion with the daily addition of his prisoner’s hair. This was, by no circumstances, an intended murder.
Peter Pettigrew: erm, was he the murder?
“Ah Wormtail, you don’t want me to spoil the surprise? Your part will come at the very end, but I promise you, you will have the honor of being just as important as Bertha Jorkins.”
**Imagines Voldemort silently giving the kill signal** Sarcasm? I mean he does a second before say…
“I will allow you to perform an essential task for me, one that many of my followers would give their right hand to perform.” We all know how that went…
Likely maybe, one problem: he’s still ALIVE!
Wormtail, if he’s going to die, isn’t going to die UNTIL he’s given his blood for Voldemort…First off, don’t kid yourself into thinking Wormtail was supposed to murder Harry; we know full well, the Dark Lord wants to do it himself.
“You see, I think, how foolish I was to suppose that this boy could ever be stronger than me,” said Voldemort. “But I want there to be no mistake in anybody’s mind. Harry Potter escaped me by a lucky chance. And I am now going to prove my power by killing him, here and now in front of you all, and there will be no Dumbledore to help him, no mother to die for him.”
Before I go on…GREAT PART, really great part… Anyway…Wormtail was supposed to kill a different person! Voldemort needs his animagi abilities so that he can spy on people and get information. And don’t think maybe, Wormtail’s supposed to kill himself, I guess it’s possible, Voldemort shows no remorse killing his followers, but, yet HE’S ALIVE! Murder and suicide are different things.
Murder:
1. The unlawful killing of one human by another, especially with premeditated malice.
Suicide:
1. The act or an instance of intentionally killing oneself.
So the suicide theory…out, Wormtail’s killing someone else… the questions keep coming…You confused yet?
Igor Karkaroff: A likely theory, but not important enough to the Dark Lord for him to take action, and the flaw is that he’s still alive of course…
“And here we have six missing death eaters…three dead in my service. One, too cowardly to return…he will pay. One, who I believe has left me forever…he will be killed, of course.”
Ok, we know point blank, that Karkaroff is one of these two people. If he’s the cowardly one, then he’s without doubt going to pay, (likely, because he runs away) but he couldn’t be our essay’s death, because he’s going to end up paying way AFTER Voldemort’s brought back. Then, the one who’s left him forever (Snape’s my bet,) but if Igor is then he will be killed, of course. Still, he’ll be killed AFTER! Either way, Karkaroff isn’t our ultimate murder now is he?
“Karkaroff?” said Moody with an odd laugh. “Karkaroff fled tonight, when he felt the dark mark burn upon his arm. He betrayed too many faithful supporters of the Dark Lord to wish to meet them…but I doubt he will get far. The Dark Lord has ways of tracking his enemies.”
It looks like he’s out of the picture…sorta’ sad when you think about it…maybe we’ll see him again? Our sad search for X continues.
Albus Dumbledore: Don’t even bother asking…VOLDEMORT IS TERRIFIED OF HIM! He’s the ONLY person that Voldemort fears; Voldemort’s not going any where near him until after he’s got a body.
“But you’re different. Everyone knows that you’re the only one You-Know-Who, alright Voldemort was frightened of.”
"I fashioned myself a new name; a name I knew wizards everywhere would one day fear to speak, when I had become the greatest sorcerer in the world!"… “You're not," he said, his quiet voice full of hatred. "Not what?" snapped Riddle. "Not the greatest sorcerer in the world," said Harry, breathing fast. "Sorry to disappoint you and all that, but the greatest wizard in the world is Albus Dumbledore. Everyone says so. Even when you were strong, you didn't dare try and take over at Hogwarts. Dumbledore saw through you when you were at school and he still frightens you now, wherever you're hiding these days—The smile had gone from Riddle's face, to be replaced by a very ugly look. "Dumbledore's been driven out of this castle by the mere memory of me!" he hissed. "He's not as gone as you might think!"
Why would Voldemort ever send someone 10 times less powerful than he was to go after the most powerful wizard of the century?
“Peter Pettigrew? That little fat boy who was always tagging after them at Hogwarts?”
“Hero worshipped Black and Potter, Never quite in their league talent wise. I was always rather sharp with him; you imagine how much I regret that now…stupid boy…foolish boy…he was always helpless at dueling.”Unless you go back to the Voldemort-wanting-Pettigrew-dead theory, so he’d send Wormtail just to force him to die, but I think we’ve agreed that Wormtail is too important. Dumbledore wasn’t supposed to die…we have no other X candidate…
IV Still More Questions
I don’t understand why questions like “do wizards drink coffee” and “how old is Professor Dumbledore?” are asked so frequently and why everyone’s pondering the identity of the Half-Blood Prince, when there’s so much more to question…
THERE’S BEEN COLD-BLOODED MURDER! And no one’s noticed…
I was getting desperate for someone else to see it and noticed that Galdriel Waters at least mentions it in her book, The Unofficial Guide to the Mysteries of Harry Potter, but why is it not bolded, highlighted and printed 50 TIMES! EACH DEATH WAS INCREDIBLY IMPORTANT, WHY IS THIS UNNOTICED?
Is this just another red-herring? But then I don’t know! Usually JK’s red herrings are reiterated 50 thousand times, Snape…evil dude…gunna’ steal the stone; what’d we have to do to prove that? Set his robes on fire, see him threatening Quirrel in the forest, roaming around in the library late at night…this isn’t mentioned enough to be a red herring!
While some of you may think it’s Bertha Jorkins’ cousin, they (The Ministry) got a few words in with her, she isn’t dead.
I read through the Order of The Phoenix, checked some time lines and a missing person in GoF was never once mentioned…eerie isn’t it?
V When?
I’m positive this murder didn’t take place during OoTP, we all read it, and we know Voldemort was reborn in number 4-- not book 5, in order for him to be revived, someone had to die…We need a more specific time? Professor Plum with the wrench in the conservatory…we know who, Wormtail…avada kedavra maybe, but we need a Mr. Body and a when and where!
This killing took place after the Quidditch World Cup…if we could only figure out who it was!
“Why wait until the World Cup is over?”
“Because fool, at this very moment wizards are pulling in from all over the world, and every meddler from the Ministry of Magic will be on duty, on the watch signs for unusual activity…They will be obsessed with security, lest the muggles notice anything. So we wait!”
VI Conclusion
“And there hasn’t been anything that looks like him yet, no funny deaths or anything.”
“That’s because there haven’t been any suspicious deaths yet,” said Sirius “Not as far as we know anyway.”
You now start to see the problem, as far as we know, DESPITE THE DEATHS AND ATTEMPTED DEATHS, there’s no important murder that would severely change the course of the books or make Harry Potter easier to come by. That’s why it isn’t so big a deal to fans, because JK is trying to push this death further into the shadows…The only conclusion I can come to is that there was another murder in the book that was previously un-released or that we’re not supposed to know about.
Am I the only one who’s incredibly frustrated here? Who’s X? My head’s killing me…I can’t figure it out…please respond I could go with some ideas…Thank you for reading!