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Cinderelly
Original
Title: Ron's Admirer
Author: Goldy
Status: Completed
Portkey Side Ship(s):
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romanc/Humor
length(optional): 19907 Words 4 Chapters
Non Portkey Ship(s): Harry/Hermione
Location(URL): PORTKEY PORTKEY FFN
Based upon book: Book 1-5
Warnings: some Ron-->Hermione
Summary(optional): Ron has a secret admirer, Harry finds the entire thing highly amusing, and Hermione's jealous of Luna. Ron's POV
Optional User Comments: Really funny and characters stay in character. Go read it you wont be disappointed.
simonsays
Lovely. The humor is unforced, the characters come alive on the page, and....it's just lovely.
SweetSolitude1377
This fic is amazing! I laughed so hard while reading that I cried! Not only that, but it is so wonderfully sweet, too. I just can't get enough of Goldy's writing. Also, I should mention that if you are a Harry/Hermione shipper, this is definitely something you'll enjoy! I know I did!

~Sweet wub.gif
Goldy
Thanks so much for the rec. And all the nice comments, you guys are so sweet. *Bushes madly*

I'm glad that you enjoyed and, I must say, writing Ron's Admirer was probably the most fun I've ever had writing anything. Ron's voice came really easily to me and I highly enjoyed being able to poke a little bit of fun at H/Hr.
Cinderelly
This and the next 2 posts had originally formed a "lost fic" thread. I've moved it here after hiding spoilers in white fonts.
~Pen/gal-texter Dec 2008


Story Title: don't know
Author Name: see above
Main ship: Harry/Hermione
Plot: I can't remember exactly what it was about all I remember is a small part. Ron is trying to wake Harry up, by this time Harry is involved with Hermione anyway, Ron tries to wake Harry but he's not budging so Ron yells at him that Voldemort has

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kidnapped Hermione. Harry, jumps up and out the door of the dormitory in his p.j's. Ron bolts after him but Harry's not paying attention finally Ron tackles' Harry and confesses that he lied.

Harry then starts beating Ron and either Seamus or Dean screams, " Harry's trying to kill Ron!" or something along those lines. the rest of the house comes down to watch. Still no one tries to seperate the two, Hermione comes and as soon as Harry sees her he latches onto her. Hermione asks Ron what he did after a bit, he fesses up to what he did to Harry. Then Dean or Seamus Yells "Hermiones try to kill Ron!"
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Last seen where: Portkey FF.Net or FA
How long ago: less than a year ago.


Thank you.
FuzzyFurball
The story you are looking for is called "Ron's Admirer" by Goldy.
It can be found at portkey here: http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/3068
The scene you described is at the end of chapter 4.

Hope that helps,

~Ryan
Cinderelly
Yes, that was it. This story is found. Thank you .
amblica
This and its replies were moved from another thread. - PK mods

QUOTE(Nora @ Jun 17 2007, 01:07 PM) *

I thought H/Hr had a scene in OotP that already established that there was sexual tension:

The fight before they go off to save Sirius. I mean, they yell at the top of their lungs, but continue stepping closer and closer to each oother. I thought that was very sexy. As opposed to certain other couples who stand 10 feet apart.




Goodness! That reminds me of a fanfic I read some time back!

The fic was told from Ron's point-of-view, and in that fic, Ron had a crush on Hermione but she knew nothing about it.

Somewhere in the fic, Harry and Hermione

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began staring at each other, and Ron had thoughts that went along these lines:
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Irritating thing number 1 about Harry and Hermione: they always communicate by staring at one another. It's like they are able to talk to each other wordlessly while I'm left looking blankly at them like an idiot.

Apparently, they came to a consensus after the long staring bout because Hermione just turned to me and said, "All right Ron, we've made a decision."
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And further in the fic when Harry and Hermione were arguing and Hermione was in tears:
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Irritating thing number 2 about Harry and Hermione: whenever they argue, they step CLOSER TOGETHER. One would think that when two people argue, they would want to get as far away from each other as possible. But not Harry and Hermione, no.
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And the fight had them step so close that they were almost touching each other, before they realised that it was all a misunderstanding. And things heated up from there.
[/END SPOILER]


Boy, it seems that a lot of our fics have turned out to be dead on, because there was an R/L fic that had a line saying "Luna's mad, but mad in a good way." thumbsup.gif
amblica
QUOTE(Dragoncateliz @ Jun 18 2007, 12:37 AM) *

That story sounds sooo awesome! Do you remember what it's called..


offtopic.gif LOL I found it after searching for "they actually step closer together" on yahoo. It seems that not many couples actually do that, considering that this was one of two results. whistling.gif

Ron's Admirer, by Goldy
Dragoncateliz
That was one of the best stories I've ever read!! biggrin.gif

I wish there was another chapter or more to it, because the whole HHr subplot wasn't finished---

I NEED DH NOW!!!!!!

Thanks so much by the way... blush.gif for getting me the story I mean...
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