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~*~Dracos Girl~*~
QUOTE(Kris)
Uhhhhh yeah Aly. You ditched us. *glares*  Welcome back...

Yeah, it's TTW is not done.....lol. Everyone left, haha.


you spelled my name wrong tongue.gif lmao *coughALIcough*...oh wells gess thats what i get for leaving PK for months...and i didnt ditch you tongue.gif i just..errr....took a very long vacation to D/H biggrin.gif innocent.gif (which im stil on *runs before i get killed*)

QUOTE(Bec)
ALY!!!! You're back!!!! *running glomp*
So glad to see you've decided to come back to us on wonderful PK. 


*coughYouDidItTocough* *falls over* hehes nice to see you to Bec sorcerer.gif yep i came back...then left for another month lols(you no i think me putting s's on the end of my words is your fault tongue.gif )

arrgh you no i miss you all sad.gif but i just cant read Harry/Hermione for some damn reason!!!, and trust me ive tryed (well trying, someone i no from aff.net is writing a fic called Porn Star that im trying to read, you should read it, quite funny really, only 2 chapters though) im hoping to come on here more though, so Bec(or Mart, Kris or HB), next time you seem me on MSN tell me to get my ass on PK biggrin.gif lol
Harry/Hermione 4eva
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*coughYouDidItTocough* *falls over*


Oh grrrrr. Sorry Ali. Don't know what came over me. I was just sooo happy to see you back. tongue.gif

QUOTE
took a very long vacation to D/H  (which im stil on *runs before i get killed*)


crying.gif Don't worry Ali, we won't kill you... much. tongue.gif


QUOTE
yep i came back...then left for another month lols(you no i think me putting s's on the end of my words is your fault  )


Moi?
Never. I'm perfectly innocent. innocent.gif
OK, OK.... I plead the 5th! tongue.gif

QUOTE
im hoping to come on here more though, so Bec(or Mart, Kris or HB), next time you seem me on MSN tell me to get my ass on PK  lol


Oh don't worry. I will. tongue.gif Have you added my new address btw?
If you haven't, or anyone else for that matter, add meeee! biggrin.gif
PM me if you need my address. smile.gif

Oh, Kris, that's reminded me- I've started looking over the word doc. for any errors/plot holes etc.
I'm now on page 42 (out of 119 happy.gif) and I've only found 38 things wrong with it so far. Considering how long it is, and how minor the things I've been noticing (I'm picky, what can I say? tongue.gif) it's pretty good. thumbup.gif
I'll send you and Karen the error list once I'm finished and Karen, I'll send you a copy of the main doc. too. biggrin.gif
Any questions, PM me. biggrin.gif

Now, as this is going SO SLOW (dry.gif) I'll do a part- See how desperate it's getting?!?

Hermione saw him coming and waved at him to come over. no signs of the previous events were showing on her face. Danger was lurking, Harry knew that but for whatever reason he felt safe and calm when he's with her.

"Hey" he said as he sat next to her.
"Morning. Did you sleep well?" She asked
Harry was just about to reply when an almighty scream pierced the calm atmosphere within the Great Hall.
"What was that?" Ginny asked just before Harry bolted from his seat and ran towards the doors in search of the source of the scream.
Ron and Hermione followed suit quickly followed by the DA members and the teachers.
'This is it.' Harry thought wildly as he ran 'This time I finish it. I have to protect her. I have to protect everyone. It's him or me this time.'


*****
Hahahah! Any one notice my Peter Pan quote? tongue.gif tongue.gif tongue.gif
Now, someone finish it for Harry. The poor boy has been through a whooooole lot this year.
Someone be nice and take mercy on our hero. smile.gif

~Bec
WonkyKris
QUOTE(AlI)
you spelled my name wrong  lmao *coughALIcough*...oh wells gess thats what i get for leaving PK for months...and i didnt ditch you  i just..errr....took a very long vacation to D/H  (which im stil on *runs before i get killed


ohmy.gif blush.gif tongue.gif So sorry. I really did forget though. That's what happens when I don't talk you to for a loooooong time. innocent.gif

QUOTE
Oh, Kris, that's reminded me- I've started looking over the word doc. for any errors/plot holes etc.
I'm now on page 42 (out of 119 ) and I've only found 38 things wrong with it so far. Considering how long it is, and how minor the things I've been noticing (I'm picky, what can I say? ) it's pretty good.
I'll send you and Karen the error list once I'm finished and Karen, I'll send you a copy of the main doc. too.


Oooohhhh 42 out of 119? Impressive. tongue.gif
It'd good that you're noticing the minor things. I'd probabyly miss them. innocent.gif
I'll take a look at it when I can (if you've already sent it...).

Kris
Harry/Hermione 4eva
QUOTE(Kris)
Oooohhhh 42 out of 119? Impressive. 


Not really... I'm on page 68 now. I'm getting through it... slowly.

QUOTE(Kirs)
I'll take a look at it when I can (if you've already sent it...).


I haven't sent it yet, so that may be slightly difficult. tongue.gif
I'm working on it though. Promise. biggrin.gif

~Bec
SoulShine
Oh wow. you guys are still trying to compile the twilight within easy read thing? Of course it can't be easy going through all that. if i remember there were quite a few dry spells, (haha pun!) that needed to be sorted through. do not give up, perseverance is rewarded, though i dont think it will be anything more than a feeling of satisfaction.
Harry/Hermione 4eva
Hey Josh! Nice to see you again. biggrin.gif
QUOTE(Josh)
Of course it can't be easy going through all that.

It's... long. But other than that apart from a few plot holes that we have to fill in then it's not too bad. thumbup.gif

QUOTE(Josh)
if i remember there were quite a few dry spells, (haha pun!)


Yeah... and I can tell where they were! Hehe. Oh, and rolleyes.gif on the pun. tongue.gif

QUOTE(Josh)
do not give up, perseverance is rewarded, though i dont think it will be anything more than a feeling of satisfaction.


Yeah. It'll be good to get it all done. Just like when I finally finished compiling the discussion board parts into the easy-read. That was great! biggrin.gif

Now... someone post! tongue.gif

~Bec
Aurabolt
Excuse me, but is this story too full of writers? Because if it is not, I would like to contribute. I love this story so far, and I love how Harry and Hermi still haven't confessed, even after her almost complete change after her kidnapping. I have an idea for what happens next, since it's obvious that the wards around the castle are non-existent. Heck, it could just be something that isn't a threat at all, but someone familiar. (hint hint.) If you need another writer, I don't mind filling in.

Harry/Hermione 4eva
QUOTE(Aurabolt)
I would like to contribute. I love this story so far, and I love how Harry and Hermi still haven't confessed, even after her almost complete change after her kidnapping.

Of course you can contribute! This Round Robin is open to everyone afterall! biggrin.gif

I'm so pleased that you have an idea of where this can go because, as you can probably tell, this has well... died as of late. *Sigh*

Please post as soon as you can. thumbup.gif

~Bec, so happy someone's posted here again!
Aurabolt
Good. I posted a piece of the story. I would love for this to continue. It was so many different ways of working out, and we still have to explain that Griffindor mark on Harry's arm. My guess is that's proof of the Heir of Gryffindor, and has with it an increase in magic power.

I may have to add the ability of the Power-He-Knows-Not into this. My interpretation on it is that Love truly is the weapon, and that one of my concepts, Affection Power, can be used here. If anyone wants to know about it, I suggest you PM me.

Harry/Hermione 4eva
Oooooh wonderful!

For all you lazy people here is the part written by the wonderful Aurabolt!

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This is it.' Harry thought wildly as he ran 'This time I finish it. I have to protect her. I have to protect everyone. It's him or me this time.'

Harry's good hearing had'nt decieved him as he made his way towards the front gate. Fierce pounding erupted from the enchanted wooden gates before the group of faculty and well-trained honorary defenders. A first year, stricken with absolute fear, was shaking like a tuning fork in front of the doors. An "Accio Frightened Child!" from Harry moved the greenhorn out of harm's way. As the young man ran back to the dormitories as quickly as he could, Harry could feel the immidiate warmth of Hermione behind him. At the moment, he felt apprehensive and worried for her safety, even though he knew he could'nt fight to his fullest without her. He was heavily divided. "

The situation did'nt give him the time he needed. The gates splintered from the excessive force. Hermione grabbed his non-wand arm with her hand. The area which the ring once inhabited shined red, and the lion scar begin to emit a golden light once again.

That's it. I will defend 'Mione from whatever is past that door. I have to. I can't live without her. He thought.

"Hermione. Get behind me." She complied instantly.

Even he did'nt expect the giant which crashed through the doors, causing falling wooden and metal debris to fall to the stone floor.

And it was'nt alone.


Da daaaah! Hehe.
It's fantastic! I really hope someone carrys on with this.
Something to keep me from working myself to death? Please? biggrin.gif

Where has everyone gone? Huh? Huh? Huh?! tongue.gif
Come on people, you have to be out there somewhere... anyone can join in... anyone at all.
Anyone can contribute.
Please contribute. Hehe.

~Bec
Hogwarts_Sniper
hmmm, so many possibilities here, but stupid writers block kicked in this morning, lol...

QUOTE
Something to keep me from working myself to death? Please?
We wouldn't want that, lol... thumbup.gif

~Mart- Wishes he could think of something, lol...
Aurabolt
Well, I can't post again, so I would like someone to come up so we can finish this great story, and place it within the annels of time as one of the Great Achievements of the RHS Harmony! I'll pass out free pumpkin pie and pumpkin juice...you know you wait it.

After all, I left things open for interpetation. I can think of several ideas I can come up with what I did there. And I just only started writing ficlets! Most of you are much better than I am. I know you can do it!

Harry/Hermione 4eva
*Wonders in*
What's this?
No posts since LAST MONTH!?
Now really people, what are you trying to do? Kill me? Come on, please post, for me?
Someone who has been here since DAY ONE (Literally) egging people on, encouraging you all to write this wonderful story and now you're all going to just leave it to die and decay amongst the abandoned fics of time?
How can you do that to Harry and Hermione who are sooo close to getting together? After all the heartache and suffering you've all put the trio through this year? After you killed Hagrid (Oh wait.. I did that..innocent.gif)? After you brought Celest into the fanfiction world?
Now you're all gonna leave and let it die? crying.gif

If you don't want to do it for me (And lets face it, who would? tongue.gif), then how about for all of the people that have posted wonderful entires then had to leave before it's completion? Do it for everyone that has been reading, loving and waiting for more.
Do it for the love of writing. Do it for the love of Harry Potter.

Please someone post... even if it's just a little bit... just to get this moving again.
We're so close to finishing this after 2 years of hard work, don't let it die now.

~Bec crying.gif
Aurabolt
I completely agree with H/HR4eva. The last post on the story was my own. I feel pretty bad about this so far since I'm the only one who has been interested to see this continue. There are so many things we can do to continue this, and look at what we've done so far!

- Two power-ups for Harry, which still have to be explained by Dumbledore.
- A pet DRAGON!
- A sweet, delicate Hermione, which I see a lot in other fan fictions, but love here as well.
- Fudge is not only a Death Eater, but Armless! That rocked!
- The Rescuing of Hermione from two seperate dangers, which I feel we can add one more peril for her to the mix, but it has to be written well.
- New spells, longer names for power incantations (I would have just said Maximi when we casted that control spell) and we beat up Cho! HA!

We have to continue this, not only for the sweet fluffiness for H/Hr, but as a symbol of pride to all us writers!

Please! We are waiting for your response!
SoulShine
Wait i thought we finished this a while ago. its still not done?

as for the unexplained things i'll explain them.

The pet dragon, yep thats my fault, sorry. Harry only got to use her once or twice.

sweet and delicate wouldn't be words i'd use to discribe her, Dolly parton fan member is a possibility, though that would be partialy my fault as well.

Fudge as a death eater and armless. HOnestly i can't remember, when i wrote segements here alot of people lost limbs lives and other body parts. but having his arms blasted off sounds like something i'd do. probably my fault.

I dont think i even actually had Harry rescue hermione i just had him destroy everything around him and then some one else had him save her. NOT MY FAULT!!!

found that latin-english translator the link should still be here somewhere. yeah my fault as well.



my absense has been spent reading, honing my fight scenes. i have learned much.
karenkate_kitty
Hey folks... this is sad... no posts from a very very long time... I don't know if this is caused by the Half Blood Prince tragedy as for some who would like to call it that way... I hope we can get this finished ... A lot of work was put together in this piece that we're making... I know I've been away for ages but seriously... BEC... Everyone.. I hope we can still add up to this an actually finish what we're started... I hate to see this go to waste....

Bec... if you can still send me the doc files of the compilations I'd like to read the whole thing... I think I lost my old copy... Hopefully I'd be able to add something to this or sort of plot an ending if we really can't get anyone to post... but to be honest i'd really like to see this finished....

I know we can do it... I hope you guys could read my plea... see you guys around...

~Karen~
Harry/Hermione 4eva
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Bec... if you can still send me the doc files of the compilations I'd like to read the whole thing... I think I lost my old copy... Hopefully I'd be able to add something to this or sort of plot an ending if we really can't get anyone to post... but to be honest i'd really like to see this finished....

Hey Karen! Good to see you around here! *hugs*
Uuhh... not sure about the doc. file for this... no idea where I've put it to be honest. innocent.gif I think I have it in my Yahoo account somewhere.. I hope.

I'll send it over as soon as I find it... if I find it. laugh.gif

Anyways! It's very sad to see this going down the pan. I mean, really! After all we've done and how amazing this is, I hate to see it dying.
Please people, we dont have long left. We're wrapping this up now, so why can't we continue? Just for a little while...

karenkate_kitty
QUOTE(Harry/Hermione 4eva @ Jul 5 2006, 03:56 PM) *


Hey Karen! Good to see you around here! *hugs*
Uuhh... not sure about the doc. file for this... no idea where I've put it to be honest. innocent.gif I think I have it in my Yahoo account somewhere.. I hope.

I'll send it over as soon as I find it... if I find it. laugh.gif

Anyways! It's very sad to see this going down the pan. I mean, really! After all we've done and how amazing this is, I hate to see it dying.
Please people, we dont have long left. We're wrapping this up now, so why can't we continue? Just for a little while...


This is just sad... I hate to see all our efforts waste away... I'm actually accessing this at work... hopefully I don't get caught.
Aurabolt
I'm with you all the way, ladies. I tried to re-start this wonderful interactive fic that we have all benefited from, and I am more than willing to do so again if someone wants to take the reins after what I have written.

If I need to push the HMS Harmony into the waters by hand, then so be it!
SoulShine
Its been so long and God knows i've been so busy. Getting into my colloges Radiology Program is not easy. Many many Biology classes. However i am going to start finding the time to visit here more often and this does sound like the perfect intro for one of my fight scences but i'm going to have to read a bit to try and remember were the hell we are. and granted its a little well ok maybe a couple months late but welcome Aurabolt. I'll get the fight scene started and post it in a day or two after uncovering forgotten memories. be prepared to bare witness to what i have learned from those biology classes.


And it was'nt alone.

Harry saw stone start to fall around him with wood splinters flying like spears, from the giants entrance. Jumping Harry swirled his cloak around him bringing much of the deadly shrapanel dropping harmlessly to the floor.

Harry was starting to feel the power flow through his body, the mix of colors converging inside his body becoming one color with all colors. He jumped at the giant his fist shaking from excitment. This would be it. Harry's fist connected with the bridge of the giants nose as a flash of pure white light was created from the impact and left completely untainted by the bright red blood splashed out.

THe giant had just begun to move to bring its hands over its no broken nose, when Harry turned and connected his heel to the giants temple with another flash of white light.

Leaping off the creatures shoulder with a flourish, Harry landed on his feet after performing a gainer with unnatural grace and ease. The giant toppled over into the stone wall leaving stress fractures in the old rocks.

The magic was begining to stablize inside him and when it did then he would unleash hell on these creatures for attacking this place. He would show them that they chosen the wrong side to join.

Looking behind him through the destroyed door and seeing the numbers, he muttered, " Todays going to be a long one, I can see it already. God I hate mondays."



IF any one could help with the numbers and of what evil beings and creatures there are. I'll continue if you wish or you can take a crack at it if that is what you desire.

yours truely,
Joshua
Harry/Hermione 4eva
*blinks and cries happy tears* Posts!!
And! The best bit, a post with story! OMG YAY! *jumps up and down*

QUOTE(Karen)
This is just sad... I hate to see all our efforts waste away... I'm actually accessing this at work... hopefully I don't get caught.

Oooh, yeah! Here's to hoping! Hope you didn't get caught!

QUOTE(Aurabolt)
If I need to push the HMS Harmony into the waters by hand, then so be it!

*rolls sleves up and puts hands on the hull of the ship* And PUSH!!!!
Gawd, it sounds like someone's in labour! *giggle*


Fantastic Josh, really amazing! Only you can manage to write such amazing fight scenes. I suck at all the fighting.. what can I say? I'm a romantic! tongue.gif

QUOTE(Josh- Story)
Looking behind him through the destroyed door and seeing the numbers, he muttered, " Todays going to be a long one, I can see it already. God I hate mondays."

Hahahaha! Right there with ya Harry m'dear!
That line made me laugh. laugh.gif

QUOTE(Josh)
IF any one could help with the numbers and of what evil beings and creatures there are. I'll continue if you wish or you can take a crack at it if that is what you desire.

Ah. Um. There are soo many evil things in this fic... and I mean loads! We didn't wanna give them an easy year now did we? tongue.gif

Anyway, I'll go and put this bit in the easy read (Not sure if you've done it yet?) and I hope this will carry on.
Dont look at me for the next bit 'cause my muse is in ER land somewhere (My new fandom) and I suck at the fight bits. Hehe.

PLEASE! Continue with this so we can wrap it up and I can submit it to the fanfic side. biggrin.gif

~Bec
Aurabolt
Excellent! We're back on track. I want to see if at least one more person posts before I do. That's how things work in most RP Forums, and I figure that I'll do the same here.

H/Hr4Eva, you wanna go next?, and SoulShine, great post, although I do plan to have Harry be attacked by something that isn't so easy next time.
SoulShine
Like I said some one give me creatures and numbers and we will have ourselves a fight scene. though it may take me awhile, i've learned alot of new moves.
Aurabolt
Alright. Obviously we're dealing with more then just a Giant here, so let's out some others down. I don't get the feeling this is a real final battle, more like a battle that looks that way, so let's put out some more.

I would say we put down, considering Harry's obviously increased power, and the kind of allies he has...

-Five Dementors
-Inferi, you come up with the number. Should be large; After all, they are zombies in every sense of the word.. Perhaps some out of the dead DE's Harry has already taken down.
-I would say a dragon, something that at least Celest can oppose, if we can come up with one..
- Let's put a giant snake in there. Since we're not following the Horcoux storyline, It can be the large snake of destruction that he used before.
-DE's. A good number of them, who can at least cast basic to intermediate spells, and I would say only the first two Unforgivables. the AK is too powerful for some of them. Some of these should be pretty small in stature, meaning that some Slytherin decided to join the ranks after what Harry did to people in their house.
-Some Elite DE's, who are capable of casting the Death spell, and perhaps some created spells I've come up with, or someone between the three of us has..I have some ideas under a thread named Dark Magic in the fanfiction ideas thread awhile back.
-Dolohov. Since we already killed off Bella, we need a new threaten-Hermione person, and perhaps this one won't get beaten into a bloody pulp. I hate/love to say this, but Hermione is the best target here to make this a fair fight, to divide Harry's attention, and since I don't see many fanfics place her in danger when she's the much more obvious choice, I feel we should continue on the path that the Round Robin has made thus far in that regard.
-Lucius Malfoy. Recently broken out of jail (if he was ever put in), and who I believe should be leading this attack. Of course, Harry doesn't know it's not Voldie.

I would have said Snape, but I don't know your guys take on having Snape as an enemy. It seems that way for the books, but that one i'll leave up to you. Besides, it'd would set up for a wonderful double-cross.

Somewhere, we need a challenge for Harry; obviously the Giant wasn't enough. To mention that he isn't invlunerable. As I said above, we could pray upon Hermione again, or we could touch on someone else important to Harry. I'll leave that one up to you.

This is just a brainstorming post, so I can get some ideas flowing here. I personally will follow what we have, but I feel we should place Hermione in danger at least once more, and have a good mage duel without a clear winner at least once.
SoulShine
A giant is no problem because its weak points are so huge. With these ideas i'll see what i can come up with.
Harry/Hermione 4eva
Huzzah! Posts!
Cant wait to see what you come up with Josh, I know it's gonna be goooood. As always! biggrin.gif

Thanks for the list and numbers Aurabolt! smile.gif Now we can get a nice fight going on. Poor Harry. He's always getting picked on by all of these big baddies. sad.gif

Right, looking forward to what you come up with Josh. biggrin.gif

Still on the lookout for the file doc Karen, I haven't forgotten I promise.
I think I remembered where I put it last night, but I dont think its the Beta'd version.
Oh, that reminds me. As we're getting this back on track (yay!) and we're trying to wrap this up does anybody know of a Beta reader that would be prepared to give this look over?
It's a huge job and who ever does it will need to be able to spend a good while on it. So... if anyone knows of anyone with alot of spare time on their hands and is prepared to spend a good ammount of time reading, correcting and highlighting plot holes (Like what happened to Christmas??) please let me know.
If there is anyone out there who is reading this and is up for the job either drop me a PM or post on here.
I'd be eternally grateful for any help I can get on this because RL commitments mean I have little to no spare time to do this Beta job properly.
Thank you! biggrin.gif

~Bec xx
Aurabolt
Well, don't forget that I wrote a piece myself for this awhile back, and I don't plan on leaving it alone without a little more from me. Should I do now, since Soulshine hypothetically posted, or do you want to sent him a passage first, H/Hr?

Either way, I'm ready.
SoulShine
I fight, thats what i do. any romance or anything like that and your on your own for that one.


Looking behind him through the destroyed door and seeing the numbers, he muttered, " Todays going to be a long one, I can see it already. God I hate mondays."

Outside the doors the numbers of creatures was staggering,but that wasn't enough, what was apparantly needed was a giant snake from which to direct the legions.

"What in the hell? What is this a bad B horror movie? Why is there a zombie hoard following orders from Death Eaters?" Monday wasn't looking to good for the boy who lived and the rest of the week wasn't looking much better.

Hermione rushed forward to Harry, "They're not zombies, they're Inferi, the dead given movement by magic. It's very Dark magic, and shows a lack of respect for the dead."

"Inferi, zombies. Same thing, neither one is gonna complain about being killed again. And we can ad another fetish to Voldemorts already long list. Why don't you go and write that list out some place safe and I'll go kick some ass, getting some teachers would be helpful as well."

Harry didn't give her enough to answer before he ran toward the Dark Legion.

With a yell Harry sent off several fire spells that torched the ground around the inferi but surprisingly didn't touch the walking dead. "Just great so much for doing this the easy way, well if you can't burn them into nothing you crush, slice, beat and dismember them into nothing."

Once reaching the hoard Harry first opened up with a right that knocked one flying into the twenty behind it. All of them staggered back to their feet without much problem and the one harry had hit only had a slightly concave chest.

"Blast it! these zombies are hard! What did Mr. Happy pants do? Have a zombie Bellatrix give them all a lap dance?"

It was time for a change in tactics, brute force and fire weren't going to work, it was time to try a little speed and skill. Jumping up and over one inferi harry took its head and snapped its neck its head falling clean off. " Headshot"

A round kick to the face of another managed to rip the head off and explode it out the back. "Double Kill" White fire was starting to form around his hands and feet. He was begining to see a pattern to the movements. One slice of his hand and an Inferi was cut through the shoulders. "Multi kill"

The first Inferi he had taken out began to burn in dark black flames, none of these fires gave off any light if anything they seemed to suck it in.

With every movement Harry made an Inferi would fall, he stayed on one limib or none. everything was being used before these undead monsters could grab him. It became like a dance, a dance with death and of death.

Few sounds were heard coming from the hoard just one voice managed to raise above it.

"M-m-m-m Monster kill... Ludicris kill... Godlike... Holy $#!^"

Harry was a little more than half way through the mess when he saw her, There really was a zombie Bellatrix. Jumping between the black fires Harry stabbed her in the chest with his hand and came out with her heart. "Humiliation, Temple of Doom style. I am a Man though i can admit when i made a mistake, i guess you weren't really heartless after all. I'm sorry, but this a a good look for you. i bet Mr. grumpy pants just loved you. But i think its time for me to get my kicks."

Harry then vaulted forward and split the now heartless inferi with his heel.

In all it took about an hour for all the inferi to fall and begin to burn with the black fire. While the white light around Harry only grew. Now it was time to deal with the next wave of troops. ANd the teachers still hadn't arrived yet, after this was over harry would have to take over... everything. restart the magical government from scratch.

Harry only hoped that this battle wasn't going to last much longer even with the magic suplimenting his stamina he was begining to get tired.

Only one thought troubled him at this point, " I sure could use something to eat right now."

Aurabolt
Since you handled the Inferi, I'm up. Nice touch with UT terms and Bellatrix, but we're probably going to hear several compliants about it, but they don't matter. My turn, and something new for Harry do deal with from my list. I felt I had to increase the number, since he dealt with so many in Book5.

Only one thought troubled him at this point, " I sure could use something to eat right now."

The idea of pumpkin pies and roast chicken was quicly replaced by detailed visions of sorrow and dismay. Harry knew what was coming next; he had feared them once, but that fear only drove him to achieve strength through casting his Patronus, the physical manifiestation of light and strength formed as a Stag, three years ago. As the dementors, at least twenty-five in number, began to converge on him from above, Harry simply raised his wand towards the dark-robed spectres.

"Expecto Patronum!" He screamed quickly, as a twenty-foot stag raced from his wand and charged the inital assault. the front line, caught off guard by the sudden blast of positive energy, turned into 5 distinct whisps of black smoke within an instant. The reminder were repelled by the impressive show of force, but glided to the far hallway and curved under the charging animal to attack it's master.

Harry was knocked back several feet by the first Dementor that came into range, his fist of solid shadow connecting with the gut of the Boy-Who-Lived. A Dementor's body is incredibly cold, which Harry experienced first-hand as he shivered uncontrollably from his still upright position, and fired another mammal of pure light. The stag impaled his horns into the attacking Dementor, and pushed it back into three more, causing them to dissappear in kind. "That'll teach you." he said as he pulled a chocolate frog from his robes and ate it, wrapper and all. In this dire situation, there would be no time for nutritional value or manners.

The Dementor's response came from their impressive gliding speed, which enabled three of them to get behind the boy to grab his arms and shoulders and pulled them to opposite directions, simulating a cross formed from his head, arms, and legs; a fourth Dementor flew up to his face, and grabbed it on both sides. It's head began to slowly close the distance, signifying the beginning of the Dementor's Kiss.
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